Death By Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Death By Murder - Chap 3"A jewel heist, rival gangs and a cold case.
18 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is one of the mysteries that you are so good about squeezing into each new chapter. How can the grandfather be so evil and so good at the same time. I guess time will tell. I will enjoy each chapter.
Beth
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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This is one of the mysteries that you are so good about squeezing into each new chapter. How can the grandfather be so evil and so good at the same time. I guess time will tell. I will enjoy each chapter.
Beth
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. My apologies for being so far behind. Life seems to get in the way at times. I do appreciate your thoughts and kindness.
Hugs, Carol
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That is my problem at the moment. A couple of days our of town and I can't catch up.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I read the next one before this one. It makes more sense now. The hook at the end is great. I do not see any need for improvement.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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This is another excellent chapter. I read the next one before this one. It makes more sense now. The hook at the end is great. I do not see any need for improvement.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. My apologies for being so far behind. Life seems to get in the way at times. I do appreciate your thoughts and kindness.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
I like this chapter, Carol. You've developed the character of Cooper O'Hara well, and showed his sincere change of heart. It will be interesting to learn more about this family, and the jewels. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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I like this chapter, Carol. You've developed the character of Cooper O'Hara well, and showed his sincere change of heart. It will be interesting to learn more about this family, and the jewels. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Cooper had turned his back on the family, except for his mother. Now he is learning how much he wasted and how life is not all black and white.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
A well-written chapter, with lots of background information presented through Cooper's thoughts and his few words. The presence of all these people raises many questions, which I'm sure you'll address as your book progresses. Blessings & hugs. Carol
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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A well-written chapter, with lots of background information presented through Cooper's thoughts and his few words. The presence of all these people raises many questions, which I'm sure you'll address as your book progresses. Blessings & hugs. Carol
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Hi Carol, I hope to keep you guessing in every chapter, wondering what will happen in the next. I appreciate your kindness and review.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm so glad Cooper recognizes the honesty and loyalty those men had for his father. Not everyone is a scrounger. These men so openly admired Cooper's father. I hope he'll be able to help them. Another amazing chapter, my friend. Well done. Love and hug, Sandra xxxxx
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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I'm so glad Cooper recognizes the honesty and loyalty those men had for his father. Not everyone is a scrounger. These men so openly admired Cooper's father. I hope he'll be able to help them. Another amazing chapter, my friend. Well done. Love and hug, Sandra xxxxx
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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As Cooper learns more down the line, I think he will be surprised at how much these men meant to his grandfather too.
Thank you for enjoying!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Cooper is about to find out it will not be as easy as he thought to dismiss the men seated around the table. "The men and I are not here because of a sense of duty." I think Cooper will soon find out why the men ARE there, as the mystery continues to build.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Cooper is about to find out it will not be as easy as he thought to dismiss the men seated around the table. "The men and I are not here because of a sense of duty." I think Cooper will soon find out why the men ARE there, as the mystery continues to build.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Lorraine,
Nice to see you stopping by and findig my story interesting. Questions and secrets abound and the pot is stirring.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Well, this is a surprise chapter, Carol. The men are not what he expected them to be and they don't seem to have no ill feelings against him. So who are they? A very good question indeed. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Well, this is a surprise chapter, Carol. The men are not what he expected them to be and they don't seem to have no ill feelings against him. So who are they? A very good question indeed. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Hello, Ulla... Thank you so much for continuing to read my new adventure. I appreciate it very much. I haven't forgotten your incredible story. I don't want to jump in since I have missed so much. I started reading Barbara's from the beginning again, and when I finish, that's my plan for you too. It's not about the money...it's about the story.
Thanks again. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It certainly is a mystery isn't it. Where did the money come from. How could he have been so wrong about his Grandfather. He was not as bad as Cooper thought he was. The men were not the thugs he thought they were. What is happening here?Well done! Nancy:)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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It certainly is a mystery isn't it. Where did the money come from. How could he have been so wrong about his Grandfather. He was not as bad as Cooper thought he was. The men were not the thugs he thought they were. What is happening here?Well done! Nancy:)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Yes, that's an interesting question. Where did the money come from...I'm not telling...at least not yet!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Aw, see? In typical Carol fashion you've got me caring about Cooper and worried about what I suspect are many different facets of his Grandfather...
Revelations, good and bad will test his mettle!
Write on! I'm following!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Aw, see? In typical Carol fashion you've got me caring about Cooper and worried about what I suspect are many different facets of his Grandfather...
Revelations, good and bad will test his mettle!
Write on! I'm following!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Good morning, sweetie
I think the Grandfather go wrapped up in the whirlwind of the Costello family, but Andrew and the band of me brought him back to a better place. Or at least that's what I would like to think. LOL
Have a great day... I'm blessed to be here and writing again.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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And you're coming in a blaze of glory! Chapters arriving quickly! Woo-hoo!
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, this is very interesting! A new development in Cooper. Perhaps now that he knows that the bond between his grandfather and the people who worked for him, he may want to keep on the family business??
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Oh, this is very interesting! A new development in Cooper. Perhaps now that he knows that the bond between his grandfather and the people who worked for him, he may want to keep on the family business??
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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I believe Cooper's eyes and heart will learn that things are not always black and white. Thanks for the review and the interest in my story.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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That's a great theme! We need to impress that on young people especially!
