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Comment from Mark Schardine
We think of wolves as fierce and dangerous, but as you so well express it, they have faithful relationships and a social order to care for others. They can also feel profound sorrow.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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We think of wolves as fierce and dangerous, but as you so well express it, they have faithful relationships and a social order to care for others. They can also feel profound sorrow.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and cool-looking pictures--would make a cool front and back album cover, say, "The Carnivor in The Blue," well, Id have to work on the title!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and cool-looking pictures--would make a cool front and back album cover, say, "The Carnivor in The Blue," well, Id have to work on the title!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Both pictures were wonderful, Gypsy. It was definitely a great tanka. The fact that she was mourning her lost mate was a devastating event. Perhaps he is just late returning. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Both pictures were wonderful, Gypsy. It was definitely a great tanka. The fact that she was mourning her lost mate was a devastating event. Perhaps he is just late returning. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessedbe. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
One time, a little over 40 years ago. We were living in absolute nowhere Missouri, on a farm. There was a small road in front of the house. There had been a snowstorm, and nobody was going anywhere. I had a 9-month-old baby. He was fusing so I got up to rock him back to sleep. It was the wee hours of the morning. I glanced out the window, the moon was shining, and the light glistened off the snow. Down the middle of the snow packed road walked a pack of wolves. They were very scary but very beautiful. Your poem reminded me of that.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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One time, a little over 40 years ago. We were living in absolute nowhere Missouri, on a farm. There was a small road in front of the house. There had been a snowstorm, and nobody was going anywhere. I had a 9-month-old baby. He was fusing so I got up to rock him back to sleep. It was the wee hours of the morning. I glanced out the window, the moon was shining, and the light glistened off the snow. Down the middle of the snow packed road walked a pack of wolves. They were very scary but very beautiful. Your poem reminded me of that.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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How wonderful that my poem brought good memories, I'm glad. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Raul1
I like your poem and the graphic design you of the wolves. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Exceptional work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I like your poem and the graphic design you of the wolves. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Exceptional work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Cheers. :)
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome, my friend!
Comment from lyenochka
That's quite a great set of graphic images! I like that the wolves can freely express their mourning of long absent loved ones through their nightly howling. Nicely done tanka!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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That's quite a great set of graphic images! I like that the wolves can freely express their mourning of long absent loved ones through their nightly howling. Nicely done tanka!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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I've been trying to use gif pictures, they are so fun. Thank you very much for your time and insightful review. Love you ❤️
Marival