I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Gold Beyond The Rainbow "Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from Ricky1024
Yhis was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Yhis was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for the comments
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an epic story steeped in fantasy and a reference to a dream as with Alice in Wonderland, it all comes our in the wash as my Mother used to say. Life can throw things at us and we have to cope. Here your dreamy world helps you to se the light. Slaughtered the enemy in our dreams helps us conquer the world, a fun post, I need a cup of tea now, phew! love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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This is an epic story steeped in fantasy and a reference to a dream as with Alice in Wonderland, it all comes our in the wash as my Mother used to say. Life can throw things at us and we have to cope. Here your dreamy world helps you to se the light. Slaughtered the enemy in our dreams helps us conquer the world, a fun post, I need a cup of tea now, phew! love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2023
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Thanks, I?m a coffee guy. Having a cup now.
Norm