Here Today Gone Tomorrow
A one-line Haiku.6 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
Excellent entry for the haiku club challenge. I love the presentation. The one-line haiku is well done. Good syllables count. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Hello,
Excellent entry for the haiku club challenge. I love the presentation. The one-line haiku is well done. Good syllables count. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Yes, the sands of childhood are washed away and way too early in our present society. Children deserve to be innocent a little longer.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Yes, the sands of childhood are washed away and way too early in our present society. Children deserve to be innocent a little longer.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Moon baby
A clever way of saying nothing lasts forever, yet a cruel way of a child learning nothing lasts forever if it's taken away before its time! I like this MONOKU, I think you have a knack for this style!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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A clever way of saying nothing lasts forever, yet a cruel way of a child learning nothing lasts forever if it's taken away before its time! I like this MONOKU, I think you have a knack for this style!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from lyenochka
So true. And your "sands of childhood" reminds me of the expression "the sands of time." Yes, sand is easily washed away as is our youthful days of childhood. Great entry for the club challenge!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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So true. And your "sands of childhood" reminds me of the expression "the sands of time." Yes, sand is easily washed away as is our youthful days of childhood. Great entry for the club challenge!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Regina Elliott
What a beauteous monoku,
and so true. My grandchildren
are growing so fast. This is
such a wise one line poem.
My very best wishes for the
contest. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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What a beauteous monoku,
and so true. My grandchildren
are growing so fast. This is
such a wise one line poem.
My very best wishes for the
contest. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Here Today Gone Tomorrow"
This is a one line Haiku Club Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks and good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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"Here Today Gone Tomorrow"
This is a one line Haiku Club Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks and good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the many stars. Have a blessed day.
