In Complete Cahoots
Careless condemnation clearly comes confidently7 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I see your son has your verbal creativity! I am glad you two could make a fun game like that as deal with the problem of not being forced into unnecessary purchases! Enjoyed this story!
And hope you had a lovely birthday!!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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I see your son has your verbal creativity! I am glad you two could make a fun game like that as deal with the problem of not being forced into unnecessary purchases! Enjoyed this story!
And hope you had a lovely birthday!!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much Helen, you?re such a lovely person, always kind and so thoughtful. I really appreciate your birthday wishes - and your review of course!
Comment from susand3022
Imagine if you'd called him something else! Not a dirty word, but not necessarily something like creep either. I used to call my son a little wee heathen, I wonder what people thought of that!
Good luck with the contest! ;) Susan
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Imagine if you'd called him something else! Not a dirty word, but not necessarily something like creep either. I used to call my son a little wee heathen, I wonder what people thought of that!
Good luck with the contest! ;) Susan
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thanks Susan, I really appreciate you reviewing.
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
Wonderfully Witty
Charmingly Clever
Positively Prizeworthy
Thanks for your entry. It is a joy to read your work. Thanks for contributing!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Wonderfully Witty
Charmingly Clever
Positively Prizeworthy
Thanks for your entry. It is a joy to read your work. Thanks for contributing!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Six scrumptious stars! So smashingly sweet of you. Thanks a thousand times.
I really appreciate your very kind review, I love your alliterations, but an extra big thanks for the 6 stars!
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You are yelcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed this. I loved the healthy relationship you show here. "Yeah and you're a creep!" - Just perfect! I thought this was fun. Showed the wonderful back and forth so well thanks to the dialogue. And was very creative. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed this. I loved the healthy relationship you show here. "Yeah and you're a creep!" - Just perfect! I thought this was fun. Showed the wonderful back and forth so well thanks to the dialogue. And was very creative. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate your great review.
Comment from humpwhistle
Few writers would dare carry alliteration so far, nor be so successful in telling a story while doing so. Bravo.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
"Oh(,) mom(,) I love you so much."
"Mom(,) you're amazing!"
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Few writers would dare carry alliteration so far, nor be so successful in telling a story while doing so. Bravo.
Best of luck with the voters.
Peace, Lee
"Oh(,) mom(,) I love you so much."
"Mom(,) you're amazing!"
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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OMG 6 stars! Thank you so much.
I thoroughly enjoyed writing it - though I?m ashamed to admit that I didn?t even know what alliteration was before the prompt!
Those complicated, convoluted and conniving commas, damn them!
I?m on it.
Thank you again for the 6 stars, your great review and for taking the time to read my entry.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was a really fun story. Interestingly, the storyline in itself was so strong that the alliterations slipped into the background for the most part. Kate xx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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This was a really fun story. Interestingly, the storyline in itself was so strong that the alliterations slipped into the background for the most part. Kate xx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I have to admit, in the first draft the alliterations were way too obvious and I had to keep changing words to help them blend better (though some were beyond me!).
So I'm really please that paid off AND that you noticed!
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, In Complete Cahoots, is a totally awesome tale of two who understand each other and can suffer each other's conniving complements and stifling stoppers with reciprocal recompense.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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This story, In Complete Cahoots, is a totally awesome tale of two who understand each other and can suffer each other's conniving complements and stifling stoppers with reciprocal recompense.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Ha ha ha I hope you've entered the competition, you're good!
. . . Oh, actually on second thoughts, I hope you haven't, as I won't stand a chance!
Loved your refreshingly relevant review, six sparkling stars would be winging their way to you - if we could give stars for reviews of course!
Thank you for both your review and for making me laugh!