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Will It End?

Angry Earth

5 total reviews 
Comment from donette1914
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That is question so many people wonder about and I wanted to share a scripture from the Bible where it saids "And he will wipe out every tear from their eyes and death will be no more, neither will mourning nor outcry nor pain be anymore.The former things have passed away." Rev 21:3-4 Wouldn't that be a world you would enjoy? please visit jw.org and its free of charge no sign up fees. Feel free to reach out to me. Have a wonderful day

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2022

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Great poem. I think this question has been asked for centuries without any real answer. But I think you asked it in a unique way. Your poem is easy to read, thought the formatting was excellent, and I appreciate the message and frustration it shows.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2022

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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You have presented us with a particularly fine nonet here. I particularly liked:
Bullets are flying
People dying
It hit home hard. Good luck in the contest. Kate xx

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2022

Comment from Barry Penfold
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I have no answer to your question. I do like the ryhming poem and its simple but powerful sentiment.All the best in the contest. Lets pray love wins the day.Take Care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2022

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is beautifully written, moving from the problem and fear to begging for an answer. Your picture leaves us in no doubt as to what you recognize is the problem.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2022