Comment from Kaiku

Exceptional

Wow. Wow. Wow. The poem is great, the song is great. I was stunned. Thank you for the compilation. I look forward to more. This will be a tough act to follow!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022

Ciao!,

an early wake, and what a surprise. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem on fear. The words are simple but I do believe I still captured the darkness.

Thank you for the honour of giving my poem a six-star review.

It's the best form of encouragement. (smiles)

Ciao!

reply by Kaiku on 31-Oct-2022

Certainly!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Exceptional

This is a powerful poem. I really like how you share how the person you fell in love with now makes you afraid. The poem is touching and well written. Excellent write.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022

Our paths meet again for the third time

There is a popular saying in my country : non c è due senza tre ( there s no two without three)

This is a very unexpected gift .

Glad my words touched you.

Thank you for the encouragement.

And the song below ? I provided the live link in the note s section so all you have to do is press GO!

I wrote the poem after I heard Aurora sing : It Happened Quiet.. her voice is very haunting and in her song the victim stands up in the end.

Aurora is mesmerising.

Keep safe!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Fear, presented with four rhyming quatrains, captures the sad and desperate sounds of a trapped soul in what seems like a situation with no safe escape.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022

Thanks for the positive review ..

but did you hear the song in the note?s section .. it?s worth the view .

I would appreciate your thoughts.