Dear Some one at Home
A Soldier writes to his family2 total reviews
Comment from Kizzy H.
It was just too much all over the pace for me. Its not something i can or would read. it just starts off as if you are writing a letter but are angry.But keep up the good work.
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It was just too much all over the pace for me. Its not something i can or would read. it just starts off as if you are writing a letter but are angry.But keep up the good work.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing the story of one vet in your poem. I'm glad that he looks out for his mother and hopes that his father won't injure or harm his family again. It's good that he has good mentors like his captain while serving. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thanks for sharing the story of one vet in your poem. I'm glad that he looks out for his mother and hopes that his father won't injure or harm his family again. It's good that he has good mentors like his captain while serving. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Dear Helen, Thank you for your review and the five stars. I managed to get a lot of information about him by just having him "talk". It was a new idea that paid off. cheers Cass