Anticipation
Poem about emotion3 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this verse and can sooo relate to that feeling of being close to a weekend and the leisure time it brings. Well done on a verse we all know about and anticipate each week. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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I love this verse and can sooo relate to that feeling of being close to a weekend and the leisure time it brings. Well done on a verse we all know about and anticipate each week. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Anticipation, has the proper formatting and points to twelve oh one p.m. as when it is -- TIME TO GET DOWN FOR THE WEEKEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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This 5-7-5, Anticipation, has the proper formatting and points to twelve oh one p.m. as when it is -- TIME TO GET DOWN FOR THE WEEKEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, alliteration, and rhyme.
-I like your idea about the "Friday feeling." I
can remember those before I retired quite a while ago!
-And you are right, sometimes it wasn't "a moment too soon!"
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery, alliteration, and rhyme.
-I like your idea about the "Friday feeling." I
can remember those before I retired quite a while ago!
-And you are right, sometimes it wasn't "a moment too soon!"
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Great review zanya
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You are welcome, zanya, I appreciate your reply.
