Raindrops
A quatern.40 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Yes, Roy, they are all questions I think most of us ask ourselves these days. It's a very powerful poem which touches on our disturbing times we live through. I was very taken with your wonderful words and poem. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Yes, Roy, they are all questions I think most of us ask ourselves these days. It's a very powerful poem which touches on our disturbing times we live through. I was very taken with your wonderful words and poem. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Ulla for these terrific comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
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Thanks so much Ulla for these terrific comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Another 6 star poem, Roy! I love the depth of your poem. It makes you think, and it makes you feel. How much more can we ask for from a poem about our Savior? I don't know, either, but you keep delivering them week after week.
How many poems about God can Roy write? How many raindrops in a crowd!
God Bless,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Another 6 star poem, Roy! I love the depth of your poem. It makes you think, and it makes you feel. How much more can we ask for from a poem about our Savior? I don't know, either, but you keep delivering them week after week.
How many poems about God can Roy write? How many raindrops in a crowd!
God Bless,
Rhonda
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Rhonda, for these terrific comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
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Thanks so much Rhonda, for these terrific comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Roy. You have crafted an excellent quatern poem with a superb repeating refrain. I applaud you on the content and presentation. It really is a well written verse!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Hello Roy. You have crafted an excellent quatern poem with a superb repeating refrain. I applaud you on the content and presentation. It really is a well written verse!!
Melissa
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Melissa, for these terrific comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
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Thanks so much Melissa, for these terrific comments and a fine review, blessings Roy
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is so beautiful. I love it. The format is nice and your verses are so beautiful. Really gorgeous words here. Choice poem. Six stars most definitely.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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This is so beautiful. I love it. The format is nice and your verses are so beautiful. Really gorgeous words here. Choice poem. Six stars most definitely.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a great.review, blessings Roy
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Most welcome
Comment from estory
This is very Psalm like, very much in this Hebrew tradition of using rhyme at the beginning of lines to make the echoing effects and create the music in the language. I like how you equate so much of our failings with that image of the multitude of raindrops. There is this sense that no matter how broad and limitless our troubles, there is a redemption, a cleansing for it. It is really a great poem of redemption in many ways. estory
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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This is very Psalm like, very much in this Hebrew tradition of using rhyme at the beginning of lines to make the echoing effects and create the music in the language. I like how you equate so much of our failings with that image of the multitude of raindrops. There is this sense that no matter how broad and limitless our troubles, there is a redemption, a cleansing for it. It is really a great poem of redemption in many ways. estory
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
Your poem is poignant and effective making a thought producing piece. Your form, metre and rhyme are unforced and well done. I appreciate the work and effort.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Your poem is poignant and effective making a thought producing piece. Your form, metre and rhyme are unforced and well done. I appreciate the work and effort.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Nancy, for these excellent comments and a great.review, blessings Roy
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Comment from Boogienights
Many questions that are hard to answer. Especially the one about how long God will refrain from ending man's reign on Earth. I'm not sure id want to know. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Many questions that are hard to answer. Especially the one about how long God will refrain from ending man's reign on Earth. I'm not sure id want to know. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a great.review, blessings Roy
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed you quatern. You asked a lot of questions that only God could answer. If He knows the number of hairs in our head, we can assume He knows everything.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed you quatern. You asked a lot of questions that only God could answer. If He knows the number of hairs in our head, we can assume He knows everything.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thanks Beth, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Roy!
A lovely example of a quatern both in form and message.
I appreciate that you give no answers to the reader thus allowing the reader to pause and reflect...
Much enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Good morning, Roy!
A lovely example of a quatern both in form and message.
I appreciate that you give no answers to the reader thus allowing the reader to pause and reflect...
Much enjoyed.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thanks Diane, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy
Comment from jenintorre
How many excellent poems can you write?
I would say loads and loads and this one is no exception. You say so much in this very interesting format. I love it. Blessings. Jen.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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How many excellent poems can you write?
I would say loads and loads and this one is no exception. You say so much in this very interesting format. I love it. Blessings. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thanks Jen, for these terrific comments and super review, blessings Roy