Conflicted
When do you truly believe in your own words2 total reviews
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Very nicely written. Truly brought through the message.
Be free my friend be free.
Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed
Good luck
Keep writing
Keep sharing
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Very nicely written. Truly brought through the message.
Be free my friend be free.
Thank you for sharing. I really enjoyed
Good luck
Keep writing
Keep sharing
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a powerful post. I'm not sure about the repetition of the first stanza. But that aside I like the message that this is sharing. Fore me there is confusion and some self doubt. The the constants offer stability. At least that is how I read it and I greatly enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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I thought this was a powerful post. I'm not sure about the repetition of the first stanza. But that aside I like the message that this is sharing. Fore me there is confusion and some self doubt. The the constants offer stability. At least that is how I read it and I greatly enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your comment. I repeated the first stanza because it was me repeating it to myself. To me, it changed what I was saying, the repetition was giving the words consistency. I?m not sure I?ve explained this properly. You may just have to take my word for it. Thanks again
