The Book of Sorrows
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "When Love Goes Astray?"Fine Poetry in Depth.
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Comment from Teri7
This is a very sad poem you have penned my friend, but through all the hard things to take at least you were able to help someone else by donating. Thank you for your kind heart! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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This is a very sad poem you have penned my friend, but through all the hard things to take at least you were able to help someone else by donating. Thank you for your kind heart! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Donation by Organ!
Is an 'Organ to Organ Connection.
Allowing New Life once again
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from billscott
Wow, I am amazed at your mastery of the written word for poetry.
I gave it a try some time ago and actually completed a poetry book for publishing.
The quality you pen easily surpasses my own.
Thank you for the honour of my image for your written perfection!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Wow, I am amazed at your mastery of the written word for poetry.
I gave it a try some time ago and actually completed a poetry book for publishing.
The quality you pen easily surpasses my own.
Thank you for the honour of my image for your written perfection!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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When I first started writing 20 years ago.
I knew it wasn't coming from within me but above me.
What I learned to accept a gift.
Yes, that I can write extremely well and fast from the mine Heart and Soul.
I realized that I was a one of a kind.
Thanks for reviewing this one Bill.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from country ranch writer
When love has gone astray
We still have to go to work each day
Tars never go away
Even till this day
When love goes astray.
10/20/2022------6:20 pm
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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When love has gone astray
We still have to go to work each day
Tars never go away
Even till this day
When love goes astray.
10/20/2022------6:20 pm
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Thanks country ranch for reviewing this one.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment from country ranch writer
When love has gone astray
We still have to go to work each day
Tars never go away
Even till this day
When love goes astray.
10/20/2022------6:20 pm
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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When love has gone astray
We still have to go to work each day
Tars never go away
Even till this day
When love goes astray.
10/20/2022------6:20 pm
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Thanks again for reviewing this one!
Doctor Ricky 1924
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a fine chapter in your biographical book. I particularly liked how your words were affected by the parallelism you used. It bestowed a lot of power. Kate xx
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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This is a fine chapter in your biographical book. I particularly liked how your words were affected by the parallelism you used. It bestowed a lot of power. Kate xx
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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When I write.
I don't seriously expect that much, until I reread it.
Than review it and then present it.
And, lastly most likely surprise myself.
Thanks Katherine.
Doctor Ricky 1024