Silly Seven
Girls just wanna have fun!16 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
wow! what a poem and that photo said it all lol
what an adorable poem with the photo. Is so well done
the story line was very thought out
very creative and believable
thank you for sharing and keep on writing and cant wait to read your next poem
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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wow! what a poem and that photo said it all lol
what an adorable poem with the photo. Is so well done
the story line was very thought out
very creative and believable
thank you for sharing and keep on writing and cant wait to read your next poem
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much. It was a fun but surprisingly difficult style.
Comment from Susan Newell
Douglas,
I can't believe I missed this. Congratulations again! You might want to check out my portfolio and read "Stolen Stores." I think you would get a kick out of it. It's an alliterative children's story.
Your Wingwoman
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Douglas,
I can't believe I missed this. Congratulations again! You might want to check out my portfolio and read "Stolen Stores." I think you would get a kick out of it. It's an alliterative children's story.
Your Wingwoman
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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I found this style of poetry harder than the other forms. Still had fun! Thanks for the review! I will check out your piece.
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Most welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations on your win Douglas and this is a fine example of alliteration with a humorous theme, a clever collection of words like a tongue twister to read, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Congratulations on your win Douglas and this is a fine example of alliteration with a humorous theme, a clever collection of words like a tongue twister to read, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thank you Dolly. I actually found this hard to do, but it certainly worked out!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Congratulations on your first attempt at alliteration and winning the contest. You are off to a great start. Your poem makes sense, with a story line that is not forced. Your chosen picture and words pair perfectly, while the story is humorous. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Congratulations on your first attempt at alliteration and winning the contest. You are off to a great start. Your poem makes sense, with a story line that is not forced. Your chosen picture and words pair perfectly, while the story is humorous. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thank you! I appreciate your kind words!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Simply sublime, spectacular, so six-star worthy. Sadly subsequent studies stole seven... Silly...(me).
(Lol. I lied. But this is wonderful. You don't need that rating anyhow -- it wouldn't serve to promote this any more than it is. But congratulations on a well-deserved win! :))
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Simply sublime, spectacular, so six-star worthy. Sadly subsequent studies stole seven... Silly...(me).
(Lol. I lied. But this is wonderful. You don't need that rating anyhow -- it wouldn't serve to promote this any more than it is. But congratulations on a well-deserved win! :))
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Your beautifully kind words are better than any six star. Thank you and appreciate you!
Comment from Boogienights
I can see why you won this contest...well done. They sound like seven fun sisters surely. Your picture fits your poem perfectly and your words were a lot of fun to say. :)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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I can see why you won this contest...well done. They sound like seven fun sisters surely. Your picture fits your poem perfectly and your words were a lot of fun to say. :)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
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Thank you! You are so kind! I appreciate you.
Comment from Michaela Moore
What a challenge beginning every word with the same line. I don't think I could have done this as well as you have. A lot of your lines remind me of tongue twisters I have done as exercises in acting classes that I have taught. What a fun way to explain your pic.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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What a challenge beginning every word with the same line. I don't think I could have done this as well as you have. A lot of your lines remind me of tongue twisters I have done as exercises in acting classes that I have taught. What a fun way to explain your pic.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thank you! This is my first attempt at this style and I?m very surprised that I?m holding a slight lead!!!
Comment from Dr. Von
This piece is good writing. I enjoyed reading it and I marveled at the fun you surely had creating it. Thank you for sharing your gift. Good work. Your poem more than met the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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This piece is good writing. I enjoyed reading it and I marveled at the fun you surely had creating it. Thank you for sharing your gift. Good work. Your poem more than met the writing prompt.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thank you Sir! This is my first attempt at this style and I?m very surprised that I?m slightly leading!!!
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You are welcome. The calling to create art finds a space and fills it. LOL
Comment from royowen
I think you've written a very clever post here, the alliteration is to die for, I've seen and read several of these posts, and this is probably the purest of the alliterative post, a darn good entry, and the quirkiest well done, good luck, blessings
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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I think you've written a very clever post here, the alliteration is to die for, I've seen and read several of these posts, and this is probably the purest of the alliterative post, a darn good entry, and the quirkiest well done, good luck, blessings
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thank you Sir! So far so good! I appreciate you ! Thanks
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Well done
Comment from jacquelyn popp
Cute poem and easy to read it. I have not read this style of poetry yet, and so this was my first read for this. You did a good job at this. Well written and made me smile. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing.
Your words of the poem flowed quite nicely together.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Cute poem and easy to read it. I have not read this style of poetry yet, and so this was my first read for this. You did a good job at this. Well written and made me smile. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing.
Your words of the poem flowed quite nicely together.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks you. This was my first attempt at the style and I am so very pleasantly surprised that I am out front. Appreciate the review and I appreciate you!
