The Book of Sorrows
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Burnt Embraces"Fine Poetry in Depth.
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Comment from Mario PIERRE
Beautiful, sad, tragic. Three words that come to mind reading this raw poem. It hits the heart and kind of graze our soul, because it seems to speak to us and to our own life, our brokenness and our faults...
I enjoyed the rhyme and the climax.
Awesome job!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Beautiful, sad, tragic. Three words that come to mind reading this raw poem. It hits the heart and kind of graze our soul, because it seems to speak to us and to our own life, our brokenness and our faults...
I enjoyed the rhyme and the climax.
Awesome job!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thanks Mario for stopping by in enjoying this poem.
Yes that I wrote right across on the Dance floor.
At Hard Rock Hotel Casino in Atlantic City, New Jersey.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Burnt Embraces, seems to find the tired soul. worn out by life's "takes", willing to stop surviving and accept the solution.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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This story, Burnt Embraces, seems to find the tired soul. worn out by life's "takes", willing to stop surviving and accept the solution.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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My thanks Bill for enjoying my little short story in a poem.
Doctor Ricky