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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I have no idea how you felt, but I bet you felt tired and perhaps angry being you had to halt your ongoing life on the street. Life can be sometimes difficult, but I pray that the next chapter will be a different outcome for you.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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I have no idea how you felt, but I bet you felt tired and perhaps angry being you had to halt your ongoing life on the street. Life can be sometimes difficult, but I pray that the next chapter will be a different outcome for you.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Much appreciated review.
Comment from Sankey
This was great I only gave a five as I want to give you more on the next chapter. You MUST keep me informed of your posts Tom does not. You certainly create the atmmosphere.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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This was great I only gave a five as I want to give you more on the next chapter. You MUST keep me informed of your posts Tom does not. You certainly create the atmmosphere.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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Always appreciate your comments and reviews.
Comment from Shirley McLain
You certainly have me hooked on your story. I hope you find a way out of this problem, but only time will tell. I am ready to read the next chapter. Enjoy your Sunday evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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You certainly have me hooked on your story. I hope you find a way out of this problem, but only time will tell. I am ready to read the next chapter. Enjoy your Sunday evening. Shirley
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess, we all remember vividly the first time we're picked up by the law. Well, at least those of us that have been and are willing to admit it. LOL. Thanks for sharing another great chapter. Sorry I was so slow in reviewing, I just had to hold it the better part of the week to reward it properly. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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I guess, we all remember vividly the first time we're picked up by the law. Well, at least those of us that have been and are willing to admit it. LOL. Thanks for sharing another great chapter. Sorry I was so slow in reviewing, I just had to hold it the better part of the week to reward it properly. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Always appreciate your comments, reviews, and sixer rating for this chapter. Much more to come so stayed tuned.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi,
Whilst I'm a stickler for the law I couldn't resist barracking for you in the shadows. Hell, I almost felt the heat myself.
You did a great job of drawing me into your predicament, running alongside you, egging you on AND almost escaping too.
Thoroughly engaging and well written.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Hi,
Whilst I'm a stickler for the law I couldn't resist barracking for you in the shadows. Hell, I almost felt the heat myself.
You did a great job of drawing me into your predicament, running alongside you, egging you on AND almost escaping too.
Thoroughly engaging and well written.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Wendy G
So sad to be hounded like that. A pity none of them ever asked why you didn't want to go back there, why you were so desperate to escape! Very well written, and I always look forward to the next chapter although the story itself makes me very sad.
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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So sad to be hounded like that. A pity none of them ever asked why you didn't want to go back there, why you were so desperate to escape! Very well written, and I always look forward to the next chapter although the story itself makes me very sad.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from T B Botts
Holy cats Brett,
I was hoping you'd get away. Weren't there any alleys or stores you could have ducked in to? Why the heck were the cops so interested in putting you back there anyway? Didn't they have real criminals to pursue? I'm looking forward to the next episode. This is exciting, and a little scary.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Holy cats Brett,
I was hoping you'd get away. Weren't there any alleys or stores you could have ducked in to? Why the heck were the cops so interested in putting you back there anyway? Didn't they have real criminals to pursue? I'm looking forward to the next episode. This is exciting, and a little scary.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Okay, They caught him. I hope he opens up and tells them what goes on at the orphanage, I'm talking about why he ran away.
Once in a whilethere is a kind hearted person who will listen to what children have to say. Good jon Brett. Nancy:):)
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Okay, They caught him. I hope he opens up and tells them what goes on at the orphanage, I'm talking about why he ran away.
Once in a whilethere is a kind hearted person who will listen to what children have to say. Good jon Brett. Nancy:):)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from judiverse
Excellent song to set the tone for this chapter. Great description of the effort to escape the law. Neither alternative is good for the young fugitive. If he goes back to Hermitage, things will be even worse for him now. If he had managed to avoid capture, what would he as a juvenile on his own, be able to do? What a compelling story! Spelling: definitely, separated. I know you couldn't expect after what the boy has been through, but he'd fare better if he adjusted his attitude. That's making things worse for him. judi
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Excellent song to set the tone for this chapter. Great description of the effort to escape the law. Neither alternative is good for the young fugitive. If he goes back to Hermitage, things will be even worse for him now. If he had managed to avoid capture, what would he as a juvenile on his own, be able to do? What a compelling story! Spelling: definitely, separated. I know you couldn't expect after what the boy has been through, but he'd fare better if he adjusted his attitude. That's making things worse for him. judi
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
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You're very welcome. This is a powerful story. I hope the narrator will realize that not everyone is against him. He's too young to go it alone. judi
Comment from Judy Lawless
I was rooting for you, Brett! I don't want to go back to Hermitage Hall either. :) But I'm sure you'll take us out again, first chance you get. Again, you imagery takes us right along with you. I like the encounter with the car, and the surprise brick wall. Well done.
One thing: "...flame about three feet high scroched(scorched) my tiny hind end..."
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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I was rooting for you, Brett! I don't want to go back to Hermitage Hall either. :) But I'm sure you'll take us out again, first chance you get. Again, you imagery takes us right along with you. I like the encounter with the car, and the surprise brick wall. Well done.
One thing: "...flame about three feet high scroched(scorched) my tiny hind end..."
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
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You're most welcome, Brett.
