Performance
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Comment from Laurie Holding
Oh, you won my vote with this one. And the reason is in your title. When you're dealing with this few words and this many restrictions, the only place you have wiggle room is in your title, and yet you've managed to explode your poem's imagery even more with this one word. Great work.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Oh, you won my vote with this one. And the reason is in your title. When you're dealing with this few words and this many restrictions, the only place you have wiggle room is in your title, and yet you've managed to explode your poem's imagery even more with this one word. Great work.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Your review is wonderful, thank you, you made my day.
Comment from Sally Law
So lovely in presented and short verse 5-7-5 format, mystery poet. I know a rose of this kind enriches me. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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So lovely in presented and short verse 5-7-5 format, mystery poet. I know a rose of this kind enriches me. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much, you have a great day.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Beautifully worded 5-7-5 poem. The message is clear. The font size could be a bit larger. Your title is misspelled, not unless you meant it to be that way. Preformance should be performance. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Beautifully worded 5-7-5 poem. The message is clear. The font size could be a bit larger. Your title is misspelled, not unless you meant it to be that way. Preformance should be performance. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the review.
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You are welcome. It is a good entry.
