Seething dust
A poem49 total reviews
Comment from Mabaker12
Oh, Roy you are brilliant. Your poetry sends shivers down my spine. They are beautiful. You are truly an exceptional writer of the verse. He Above gives us all different talents and poetry is yours. Thank you for sharing. Anne.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Oh, Roy you are brilliant. Your poetry sends shivers down my spine. They are beautiful. You are truly an exceptional writer of the verse. He Above gives us all different talents and poetry is yours. Thank you for sharing. Anne.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Anne, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from GWHARGIS
A beautiful and lyrical poem that echos God's promise. This was rich with vibrant detail. I could see and hear the hawk. The imagery of it rising to the clouds was excellent. Beautiful. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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A beautiful and lyrical poem that echos God's promise. This was rich with vibrant detail. I could see and hear the hawk. The imagery of it rising to the clouds was excellent. Beautiful. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Gretchen, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Heather Knight
It's Monday and I have already used all my six stars. You deserve one, not only because of this poem, but for everything you write.
Never stop. It's a pleasure to read you. It's also a learning experience every time.
Have a lovely day,
MJ
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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It's Monday and I have already used all my six stars. You deserve one, not only because of this poem, but for everything you write.
Never stop. It's a pleasure to read you. It's also a learning experience every time.
Have a lovely day,
MJ
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Heather, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem had a great message, Roy. Yes, the Lord will do
everything you wrote. However, it is up to mankind to keep
the faith when troubles come to him for they will pass in time
as the Lord said He will be there. Your lines flowed smoothly
with good rhymes and created great imagery of what faith is
when all seems lost.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Your poem had a great message, Roy. Yes, the Lord will do
everything you wrote. However, it is up to mankind to keep
the faith when troubles come to him for they will pass in time
as the Lord said He will be there. Your lines flowed smoothly
with good rhymes and created great imagery of what faith is
when all seems lost.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Jan, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Michaela Moore
Roy, this poem is my favorite that you have written so far. The words soar as effortlessly as an eagle and hawk with perfect truth and meaning. I felt the arms of the Lord holding me aloft this darkened world while I read. Inspired by the spirit, I am sure.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Roy, this poem is my favorite that you have written so far. The words soar as effortlessly as an eagle and hawk with perfect truth and meaning. I felt the arms of the Lord holding me aloft this darkened world while I read. Inspired by the spirit, I am sure.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks Michaela for these fantasyland comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from damommy
This is beautiful, Roy. Perfect meter and rhyme, and also providing a lesson for us all. Lovely photo.
May I suggest a comma after "thunder roars?"
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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This is beautiful, Roy. Perfect meter and rhyme, and also providing a lesson for us all. Lovely photo.
May I suggest a comma after "thunder roars?"
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Yvonne, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This morning I had a text conversation with one of my daughter-in-law's, Katie. Their four-year old daughter started prek the end of August and they're seeing interesting behaviors and comments that have never been made in their house or seen before. Katie was wondering how to handle it. I told her through prayer and open communication with Charolette. As parents, they'll need to help Charolette process what she's seeing and hearing. This poem reminded me of that conversation, because we can't bend on what's true and right.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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This morning I had a text conversation with one of my daughter-in-law's, Katie. Their four-year old daughter started prek the end of August and they're seeing interesting behaviors and comments that have never been made in their house or seen before. Katie was wondering how to handle it. I told her through prayer and open communication with Charolette. As parents, they'll need to help Charolette process what she's seeing and hearing. This poem reminded me of that conversation, because we can't bend on what's true and right.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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That?s right, it?s so fortunate that God has placed you in their earthly, you are s very godly Saint, Barbara, thank you, blessings Roy
Comment from nancy_e_davis
The picture is fantastic. A Redtail Hawk.He is beautiful.
I also love...Push hard my friend don't ever bend, before the seething dust. Protect yourself though clothed in flesh when winds in anger gust.
The last verse is awe inspiring as well. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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The picture is fantastic. A Redtail Hawk.He is beautiful.
I also love...Push hard my friend don't ever bend, before the seething dust. Protect yourself though clothed in flesh when winds in anger gust.
The last verse is awe inspiring as well. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Nancy, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Seething Dust, presented with AABB-rhymed, fourteener-lined quatrains, gives many descriptions of a hazardous and difficult journey, but also with a promise of victory.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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This poem, Seething Dust, presented with AABB-rhymed, fourteener-lined quatrains, gives many descriptions of a hazardous and difficult journey, but also with a promise of victory.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Bill, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from amahra
Push hard my friend don't ever bend, before the seething dust.
Protect yourself though clothed in flesh when winds in anger gust. [love these first two lines]
[Loved..."Light-Flight, Night-Sight, and Flight-Sight. I read into it: Light fleeting, Night seeing, and Sight fleeting.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Push hard my friend don't ever bend, before the seething dust.
Protect yourself though clothed in flesh when winds in anger gust. [love these first two lines]
[Loved..."Light-Flight, Night-Sight, and Flight-Sight. I read into it: Light fleeting, Night seeing, and Sight fleeting.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Amahra, for these fine comments and a super review, blessings Roy
