One Thousand Cranes
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8 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This Haiku suite is very beautiful. It describes the waterfall without mentioning its name until the end. I like many alliterations in the poem, too.
The GIF is so cute.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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This Haiku suite is very beautiful. It describes the waterfall without mentioning its name until the end. I like many alliterations in the poem, too.
The GIF is so cute.
Excellent.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank God, Lisa. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
The pictures were beautiful, Gypsy. Your words were not only beautiful but wonderful, they showed that water is a fantastic art of Mother Nature. One respects the flow of water. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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The pictures were beautiful, Gypsy. Your words were not only beautiful but wonderful, they showed that water is a fantastic art of Mother Nature. One respects the flow of water. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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it's always so good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words. I wish you a wonderful week filled of peace and joy. Blessed be and hugs.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment from lyenochka
You took us on the waterway's journey down the waterfall with lovely alliteration and great action verbs like "rushes, tumbling, shattered" and the momentum ends with "release." Beautiful!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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You took us on the waterway's journey down the waterfall with lovely alliteration and great action verbs like "rushes, tumbling, shattered" and the momentum ends with "release." Beautiful!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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There's someone weird with my account. I know I responded to this review, and others. And didn't go through (*×*)
Big sister, it's always so good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional review and kind words. I wish you a wonderful week filled of peace and joy.
Love you,
Marival ❤️
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I thought I had already reviewed it. But found it blank so reviewed. Oh well. 💖
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That's been happening to me too! It's so weird. Tom is falling asleep on the wheel. LoL
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy---and isn't the power of erosion a mighty force in nature? It's like a relentless high pressure hose blasting away solid rock
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy---and isn't the power of erosion a mighty force in nature? It's like a relentless high pressure hose blasting away solid rock
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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it's always so good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional review and kind words. I wish you a wonderful week filled of peace and joy.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Every time I think you can't provide us with any better package you prove me wrong with writing a better poem, a better artwork and better coloring. You're a tough act to attempt to live up too.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Every time I think you can't provide us with any better package you prove me wrong with writing a better poem, a better artwork and better coloring. You're a tough act to attempt to live up too.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Barbara's, it's always so good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional review and kind words. I wish you a wonderful week filled of peace and joy.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
Nice poem about water- and it inner action with earth stone - suggest - erosion in place of chipping away - eroding way sharp edges' More accurate - smooth and polish stone- where promises release as waterfalls- ? Good poem
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Nice poem about water- and it inner action with earth stone - suggest - erosion in place of chipping away - eroding way sharp edges' More accurate - smooth and polish stone- where promises release as waterfalls- ? Good poem
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Ap, it's always so good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has good imagery and alliteration:
--rapid river rushes
--tumbling turbulent
I especially liked:
where promises of release are -
waterfall
(Great ending. I can see it; I can hear it)
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hi Gypsy, your poem has good imagery and alliteration:
--rapid river rushes
--tumbling turbulent
I especially liked:
where promises of release are -
waterfall
(Great ending. I can see it; I can hear it)
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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I'm so happy you are able to visualize my poems, that's the goal with Japanese poetry. Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this theme you have chosen, Gypsy. I reviewed another verse a few minutes ago and both of you have done a superb job. The trio of haiku tell a story and it compliments the artwork that is very beautiful. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I love this theme you have chosen, Gypsy. I reviewed another verse a few minutes ago and both of you have done a superb job. The trio of haiku tell a story and it compliments the artwork that is very beautiful. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Melissa, it's always so good to hear from you. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words. I wish you a wonderful week filled of peace and joy.
Gypsy
