The Book of Sorrows
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Moving Backwards into Reality"Fine Poetry in Depth.
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Comment from country ranch writer
10/21/2022++++2:26 pm
Losing "Reality " comes at a price we list out self esteem and takes forever to get it back, pulling your self up by your blog straps.
loss takes a toll on you whby your whenever you least expect it. Just when you think you are there it tears you down again, God sticks with you though and you finally gear his it's and find your reality again in which you thought you once list. Everyone is waiting you with open arms to save a life like you lost and keep the crusade on going to help those who can't help themselves and let them live for another. Lives are witprth saying do your part .
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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10/21/2022++++2:26 pm
Losing "Reality " comes at a price we list out self esteem and takes forever to get it back, pulling your self up by your blog straps.
loss takes a toll on you whby your whenever you least expect it. Just when you think you are there it tears you down again, God sticks with you though and you finally gear his it's and find your reality again in which you thought you once list. Everyone is waiting you with open arms to save a life like you lost and keep the crusade on going to help those who can't help themselves and let them live for another. Lives are witprth saying do your part .
Comment Written 21-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2022
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Well thank you country ranch writer for stopping by and enjoying and reviewing my work again!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Yes indeed, sometimes all one can do when every other option has been spent is have an honest to goodness, good, hard, cry. May not solve anything, but makes one feel better afterwards.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Yes indeed, sometimes all one can do when every other option has been spent is have an honest to goodness, good, hard, cry. May not solve anything, but makes one feel better afterwards.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Yes Brett the warmth of an inner cry within thy very eye may not amount to anything but a me oh my but the warmth afterwards inside that God instills could perhaps eventually work on the ills not necessarily meeting any kind of pills.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from prettybluebirds
This sounds more like the kind of writing you usually do. Sometimes we wonder why we bother to hang on, and yet, we do. I love the picture by cleo85. I have used a lot of her artwork too.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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This sounds more like the kind of writing you usually do. Sometimes we wonder why we bother to hang on, and yet, we do. I love the picture by cleo85. I have used a lot of her artwork too.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I like love writing sometimes I love to confuse with my writing most of the time I explained it in the editors notes.
Thanks again.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
I am a bit surprised that this is a chapter in a book and not a poetry submission. Your verse is quite poetic. Assuming this is not the first chapter you've submitted, I may need to review your portfolio to see how this chapter fits with others that have come before. Your words certainly convey feelings of loss, melancholy, and helplessness. I assume this is autobiographical and wish you success in your difficult road back.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I am a bit surprised that this is a chapter in a book and not a poetry submission. Your verse is quite poetic. Assuming this is not the first chapter you've submitted, I may need to review your portfolio to see how this chapter fits with others that have come before. Your words certainly convey feelings of loss, melancholy, and helplessness. I assume this is autobiographical and wish you success in your difficult road back.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Almost everything I write I'll throw into one of my books I have hundreds on this site.
Thanks Charles for coming aboard.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Kaiku
I really liked this Ricky. Maybe it was the long walk I took today and the reflection I had of your previous story (I shared it with my brother). This one had a different tone to it. It had normalcy in its read, if that make sense. It didn't have the hopelessness I have read in the past. Thank you. I guess I was out of six stars because that is what I wanted to give you. Thanks.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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I really liked this Ricky. Maybe it was the long walk I took today and the reflection I had of your previous story (I shared it with my brother). This one had a different tone to it. It had normalcy in its read, if that make sense. It didn't have the hopelessness I have read in the past. Thank you. I guess I was out of six stars because that is what I wanted to give you. Thanks.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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You will notice Kaiku,
That when I get into the first week of November.
(which would be the birth of my 18-year-old son Jason)
That my depth level will increase deeply for 5 days.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024
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Comment from joann r romei
I can feel the pain the writer is experiencing and put on paper for the reader to experience, yes all we can do is cry, it is a release from the tension we experience from our troubles, You are in my prayers, Blessings
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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I can feel the pain the writer is experiencing and put on paper for the reader to experience, yes all we can do is cry, it is a release from the tension we experience from our troubles, You are in my prayers, Blessings
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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So nice to see you reviewing this one Joanne.
A good writer can very quickly emote their emotions with just a writing implement in a heartbeat.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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