Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! This short poem does a wonderful job of sharing what I'm guessing is spring all year round. Sounds tempting! Lovely rhyme and flow. This poem was a joy to read.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
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Comment from
BermyBye50
A lovely entry in the Naani poetry contest. The beauty and simplicity of nature's exquisite design shines through within every line. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
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