Would Anything Change?
If a time machine could let you change things...?6 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You ask an excellent question with your poem. The things we might change, like being born handicapped or to the mother we had, can't be changed. What we can change might have made us an entirely different person, not necessarily one we would like.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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You ask an excellent question with your poem. The things we might change, like being born handicapped or to the mother we had, can't be changed. What we can change might have made us an entirely different person, not necessarily one we would like.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very interesting question to pose in your contest entry. I think as we get older we get more reflective we get of our past. I do not think there is anyone who has regrets about things they would have done differently, word they wish they could take back or have said.
Very well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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A very interesting question to pose in your contest entry. I think as we get older we get more reflective we get of our past. I do not think there is anyone who has regrets about things they would have done differently, word they wish they could take back or have said.
Very well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your generous rating and kind comments. I am back logged on my reading, but I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This was a neat idea, and I liked the picture with it. With the wisdom I have now, there surely are some things I would do differently, but since that's not going to happen, I can just use all that collective wisdom now . . . hopefully! I hope this does well in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This was a neat idea, and I liked the picture with it. With the wisdom I have now, there surely are some things I would do differently, but since that's not going to happen, I can just use all that collective wisdom now . . . hopefully! I hope this does well in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your generous rating and kind comments.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 2-4-2 poem for the contest. It is amazing how your 2-4-2 entry makes so much sense with so few words. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This is a very well written 2-4-2 poem for the contest. It is amazing how your 2-4-2 entry makes so much sense with so few words. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a 2-4-2 poem that questions the reader's perception of his or her here and now. The text is easy to read and understand. My answer would be no, unless I could know what I know now. The only thing I would change without that ability is the death of my child. Your short poem has served the purpose of getting us all to reflect with regret or accept with the knowledge "it is what it is". Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This is a 2-4-2 poem that questions the reader's perception of his or her here and now. The text is easy to read and understand. My answer would be no, unless I could know what I know now. The only thing I would change without that ability is the death of my child. Your short poem has served the purpose of getting us all to reflect with regret or accept with the knowledge "it is what it is". Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Would Anything Change?, has the proper formatting and asks that question we have all considered. Most might say yes, remembering the pain. Others would say no, feeling the bad led to good.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This 2-4-2, Would Anything Change?, has the proper formatting and asks that question we have all considered. Most might say yes, remembering the pain. Others would say no, feeling the bad led to good.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your generous rating and kind comments.
