Her World
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Exactly! Your poem expresses what I say on an almost-daily basis, especially when I run by bus stops in the mornings. Parents are scrolling, children are standing alone. It breaks my heart.
You've done a good job with words and image here. Best of luck in this contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Exactly! Your poem expresses what I say on an almost-daily basis, especially when I run by bus stops in the mornings. Parents are scrolling, children are standing alone. It breaks my heart.
You've done a good job with words and image here. Best of luck in this contest.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you Pam. I really appreciate your insightful words. It is distressing to see this social addiction harming our families!! Thanks again.
Melissa
