Time
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Comment from Michael Cassar
Time is a concern for our duration on this planet. The poem tries to balance the reality of fences with the time it takes to bring them down. The author felt compelled to write this personal feeling, maybe for us his reviewers to observe or to assert it for its inclusion in history. Thank you for graciously reminding us.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Time is a concern for our duration on this planet. The poem tries to balance the reality of fences with the time it takes to bring them down. The author felt compelled to write this personal feeling, maybe for us his reviewers to observe or to assert it for its inclusion in history. Thank you for graciously reminding us.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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And thank you for a gracious review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Time restricts us all as it runs out for us eventually and we may try and push the boundaries but time always holds the upper hand, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Time restricts us all as it runs out for us eventually and we may try and push the boundaries but time always holds the upper hand, a fine write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Dolly.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh wow this is a thinker isn't it? Felt like I just girly off the Tilt-O-Whirl at the fair. The last sentence contradicts the first, but if I'm correct, that was the point. Maybe?
Good stuff.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Oh wow this is a thinker isn't it? Felt like I just girly off the Tilt-O-Whirl at the fair. The last sentence contradicts the first, but if I'm correct, that was the point. Maybe?
Good stuff.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Exactly the conundrum.
Thank you,
Doug
Comment from Theodore McDowell
To me, this poem shows a struggle with time and its fences or parameters. It is a philosophical poem that makes the reader think. Thanks for sharing. Well done.
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To me, this poem shows a struggle with time and its fences or parameters. It is a philosophical poem that makes the reader think. Thanks for sharing. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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You're welcome,
and thank you.
Comment from Sugarray77
I love the humor that you used in your notes... made me smile. Your content is very apropo as the autumn usually has me bound to routine and compliance to the norm. So glad you understand and wrote a stellar poem to convey the feeling. Well done on all parts, Victor.
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I love the humor that you used in your notes... made me smile. Your content is very apropo as the autumn usually has me bound to routine and compliance to the norm. So glad you understand and wrote a stellar poem to convey the feeling. Well done on all parts, Victor.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you most sincerely.
Comment from royowen
Of course time is restricted to rules, and sometimes heavy penalties for violating them. Eternal realms are much more preferable, it is not subject to limitation, freedom is the essence of infinity, the freedom folk talk of here, has manifold rules and limitations. Therefore there's no freedom with time. Beautifully written Doug, blessings Roy
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Of course time is restricted to rules, and sometimes heavy penalties for violating them. Eternal realms are much more preferable, it is not subject to limitation, freedom is the essence of infinity, the freedom folk talk of here, has manifold rules and limitations. Therefore there's no freedom with time. Beautifully written Doug, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Roy.
I always appreciate your point of view,
and...U never spew criticism unless...
no, never. You, instead, suggest/teach with a light hand.
Thank you,
Doug
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Bless you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your well thought out poem, Victor. Its presentation
was great. I liked the color scheme, the image, and the formatting
of lines. Your words were filled with great and true imagery. Yes,
time is a man made 'thing.' The world would still spin normally
without something that tells mankind to do this, it's time. . . .
We have become slaves to time. Your poem carried the message
well of your thoughts and feelings.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed your well thought out poem, Victor. Its presentation
was great. I liked the color scheme, the image, and the formatting
of lines. Your words were filled with great and true imagery. Yes,
time is a man made 'thing.' The world would still spin normally
without something that tells mankind to do this, it's time. . . .
We have become slaves to time. Your poem carried the message
well of your thoughts and feelings.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you, for vibrating
in tune with the fork.
Lol
Doug
