I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 81 "I Love hope "Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good poem about loving hope. The message is positive and uplifting. However, the presentation needs work. The text could be larger or in a color. The background could be a color, and a visual of some sort would enhance your poem and make the presentation more welcoming. We eat with our eyes first. Visuals and color capture the reader's attention, but the words glue him or her to the page. Good poem so enhance it.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This is a good poem about loving hope. The message is positive and uplifting. However, the presentation needs work. The text could be larger or in a color. The background could be a color, and a visual of some sort would enhance your poem and make the presentation more welcoming. We eat with our eyes first. Visuals and color capture the reader's attention, but the words glue him or her to the page. Good poem so enhance it.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I have migraines and have trouble with computer settings. I don?t look for ratings. I just started writing again.
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Yes, most who love writing do not worry about the ratings.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Looking forward to better days. Hoping things keep looking up. Wanting to live in harmony and peace. Working hard to do what is right. Thinking positive. Thank you for sharing. And have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Looking forward to better days. Hoping things keep looking up. Wanting to live in harmony and peace. Working hard to do what is right. Thinking positive. Thank you for sharing. And have a great weekend.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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It?s been a while. How are you?
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I'm doing okay. Thank you for asking. I hope everything is great for you.
