Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "A Lesson Taught in Silence"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
5 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
As far as I can see, your eyes may tell you lies, mislead you badly, have things turn out sadly. Take a look around you, do not be surprised who, when you were lost, who might have found you.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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As far as I can see, your eyes may tell you lies, mislead you badly, have things turn out sadly. Take a look around you, do not be surprised who, when you were lost, who might have found you.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thanks, nomi
Comment from lyenochka
Great rhymes throughout this short poem. But it makes me feel a bit sad. Still there is hope in pressing on and doing "what is due" until the "daylight dies" and look to a new day when "tomorrow's sun will rise."
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Great rhymes throughout this short poem. But it makes me feel a bit sad. Still there is hope in pressing on and doing "what is due" until the "daylight dies" and look to a new day when "tomorrow's sun will rise."
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Helen.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem was well written, Bill. I enjoyed the rhymes, the
smooth flow, and the hidden message (if there is one). It
seemed to me you were some people's eyes see only what
they want to see despite the reality. They are blind to what
has gone on because it didn't fit their agenda.
The image was supportive.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Your poem was well written, Bill. I enjoyed the rhymes, the
smooth flow, and the hidden message (if there is one). It
seemed to me you were some people's eyes see only what
they want to see despite the reality. They are blind to what
has gone on because it didn't fit their agenda.
The image was supportive.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Jan, for giving this a look.
Comment from Jay Squires
Wow, If only ... Wouldn't that be a wonderful way to live our lives: being honest to ourselves during our days, but to shed just before we close our eyes to sleep, all the bitter sensitivities we'd accrued like poisoned pollen during the day. If only ...
Beautifully done, Bill!
Jay
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Wow, If only ... Wouldn't that be a wonderful way to live our lives: being honest to ourselves during our days, but to shed just before we close our eyes to sleep, all the bitter sensitivities we'd accrued like poisoned pollen during the day. If only ...
Beautifully done, Bill!
Jay
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Jay, for your terrific review. Bill
Comment from jessizero
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Your phrases were lovely, and I admire your rhymes. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Your phrases were lovely, and I admire your rhymes. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Jessizero.
