There is Hope
Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
You wrote a lovely Rictameter with lovely lines of faith and dedication. I enjoyed reading it and wish you luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your faith with us.
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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You wrote a lovely Rictameter with lovely lines of faith and dedication. I enjoyed reading it and wish you luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your faith with us.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for sharing this spiritual message of hope in this unique form of poetry. I have written a Rictameter in the past, and they're not easy.
Thank you again for sharing, and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you for sharing this spiritual message of hope in this unique form of poetry. I have written a Rictameter in the past, and they're not easy.
Thank you again for sharing, and I wish you all the best in the contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review and the good wishes!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
The picture paired perfectly with your well-chosen words.
Great job with the style of the rictameter--all lines were correct
in syllable count. Your message was well-thought out and stated
without being preachy.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author.
The picture paired perfectly with your well-chosen words.
Great job with the style of the rictameter--all lines were correct
in syllable count. Your message was well-thought out and stated
without being preachy.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Jan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from SuzieWoo
I like this, the message is simple and the wording equally so (that's not a bad thing - people overcomplicate things a lot!) but I think with the rictameter, the final two lines are supposed to be identical to the first, aren't they? Might be worth checking the guidelines again, good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I like this, the message is simple and the wording equally so (that's not a bad thing - people overcomplicate things a lot!) but I think with the rictameter, the final two lines are supposed to be identical to the first, aren't they? Might be worth checking the guidelines again, good luck!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your help and the review! I have fixed the mistakes. Is it better now for a five stars rating? Please check!
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Ah yes, I see, that's great. I've revised. I'm quite strict with my use of five stars but I have added a star now.
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Okay, it's acceptable! Thank you!
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I have changed the eighth line and that rhyming is not needed. Can you please check it? Is it better now for a five stars rating?
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Oh yes, you're right - I'd misread it! Only the final line has to be the same. Definitely better (in my opinion!). Thanks for the update!
Comment from Moon baby
I love how this looks on paper, the shape of the diamond. I too, pray for miracles and believe they happen all the time. This contest seems very difficult and you have done it making it appear easy! I hope you win!!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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I love how this looks on paper, the shape of the diamond. I too, pray for miracles and believe they happen all the time. This contest seems very difficult and you have done it making it appear easy! I hope you win!!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review! I hope I win too! I'm crossing my fingers.
