Magical
Lune poetry40 total reviews
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Melissa,
Very nice entry for the Lune Poetry contest, and I wish you "Good Luck!" I like the idea of dust settling down from distant stars on your eyelashes, causing you to have fantastic dreams.
Especially in October, I love "witches" in any form!
Just wondering~ did the artwork come first or second?
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Hi Melissa,
Very nice entry for the Lune Poetry contest, and I wish you "Good Luck!" I like the idea of dust settling down from distant stars on your eyelashes, causing you to have fantastic dreams.
Especially in October, I love "witches" in any form!
Just wondering~ did the artwork come first or second?
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Hi there KB. Thank you for your lovely review. I had written the verse first and was lucky to find the art to match. I really appreciate you, my friend. :)
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
In your enchanting, lovely lune, you have made excellent, decriptive use of
your thirteen syllables. Wonderful worlds can come alive in our dreams--or in our realities.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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In your enchanting, lovely lune, you have made excellent, decriptive use of
your thirteen syllables. Wonderful worlds can come alive in our dreams--or in our realities.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I am so glad you liked this Lune, Janice. I really appreciate your comments and review. :)
Melissa
Comment from rspoet
Hello Melissa,
This is a wonderful lune poem for the contest
with marvelous imagery.
Perfect theme of stardust and dreams
to go with the lunar form.
Well done.
Best wishes and much stardust.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Hello Melissa,
This is a wonderful lune poem for the contest
with marvelous imagery.
Perfect theme of stardust and dreams
to go with the lunar form.
Well done.
Best wishes and much stardust.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Robert, thank you very much! I really appreciate your thoughts and I am delighted that you enjoyed this Lune.
Melissa
Comment from Michaela Moore
It looks like I am late coming to this reading party of your poem! However, I am in awe of each word, and it perfectly extols your subject. I love stardust on lashes bewitching. Lovely. Just lovely.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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It looks like I am late coming to this reading party of your poem! However, I am in awe of each word, and it perfectly extols your subject. I love stardust on lashes bewitching. Lovely. Just lovely.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hello Michaela. Thank you so very much for your lovely review. I am delighted you like it.
Melissa
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I loved it!
Comment from l.raven
HI Melissa, ...what a beautiful poem
my sweet friends...I love the wording...
so magical...you can almost feel the moment...
I love your poem sweet girl...and your picture
is stunning..so very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
so good to see my friend...I have been so busy...I can't
find time to stop...I do miss not writing...
so how have you been doing???...I hope and pray you are in
good health...God Bless...Love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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HI Melissa, ...what a beautiful poem
my sweet friends...I love the wording...
so magical...you can almost feel the moment...
I love your poem sweet girl...and your picture
is stunning..so very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
so good to see my friend...I have been so busy...I can't
find time to stop...I do miss not writing...
so how have you been doing???...I hope and pray you are in
good health...God Bless...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hello sweet Linda. It is so lovely to see your name here. I am doing well as I hope you are too. I look forward to reading your work. Thank you for your delightful review.
Melissa
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it's so good to see you hear as well...
I am doing well too...still have things
I have to take care of...but otherwise...
I am fine...and you sweet girl...are so very welcome...muchlove xxoo
Comment from Marienkiefer
I like this fairy dust theme. We believed (some of us...) in the tooth fairy, sugar fairy, of childhood imaginings that help us to believe in the possibilities.
A very inspirational poem that taps into the realm of the possible and how to conceive that.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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I like this fairy dust theme. We believed (some of us...) in the tooth fairy, sugar fairy, of childhood imaginings that help us to believe in the possibilities.
A very inspirational poem that taps into the realm of the possible and how to conceive that.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hello Marien. Thank you so much! I was lucky to find the art after I wrote the verse... so glad yo unlike it.
Melissa
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My pleasure 🌸
Comment from Write Right Writer
Sugar Ray...
This is an excellent lune that should do well in the contest. Your theme is strong and clear and your content is laser-focused. Your word choices are packed with powerful and evocative imagery that turbo-charges your 13-syllables and enables them to paint a complete picture. Well done!
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Sugar Ray...
This is an excellent lune that should do well in the contest. Your theme is strong and clear and your content is laser-focused. Your word choices are packed with powerful and evocative imagery that turbo-charges your 13-syllables and enables them to paint a complete picture. Well done!
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hi Curt. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I'm so glad you liked it!!
Melissa
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. I Love your photo it' had a very magical appearance. Works very well with your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. I Love your photo it' had a very magical appearance. Works very well with your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hi Joanne. Thank you for your lovely comments. I was lucky to find the artwork after I had written it... I was feeling a bit whimsical that day. LOL
Melissa
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from jake cosmos aller
liked this poem very much. Like the image and the the way it flows. I like the last line the best, "bewitching my dreams" is a great poetic line and sums up the poem.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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liked this poem very much. Like the image and the the way it flows. I like the last line the best, "bewitching my dreams" is a great poetic line and sums up the poem.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hi Jake. Thank you very much for your lovely review. I was feeling a bit fanciful and was so lucky to find the image afterwards. I'm so glad you like it! :)
Melissa
Comment from Gloria ....
A perfect lune poem in every respect. Beginning with the surreal artwork and the stardust falling. This poem is likely just what the Contest Committee will be looking for. Its romance, its air of longing, its mystery.
The crescent moon, and the meaning all present.
Well done, Melissa. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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A perfect lune poem in every respect. Beginning with the surreal artwork and the stardust falling. This poem is likely just what the Contest Committee will be looking for. Its romance, its air of longing, its mystery.
The crescent moon, and the meaning all present.
Well done, Melissa. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Hello, dear Gloria. Thank you very much for your lovely review. I was feeling a bit fanciful and was so lucky to find the image afterwards. I'm so glad you like it! :)
Melissa