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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
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I enjoyed this. It's an emotional and powerful message to a friend - very close friend. I like the message in your poem and the power of your words. Vey nicely written.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
    Thanks Michael and this was a fun and enjoyable written message.
    Yes that I love to sometimes Shed through a tear.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Teri7
Excellent
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This is another well written poem and words from your heart. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. I have had losses in my life that hurt, but nothing like the losses you have had my friend! May God bless you! Teri

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
    When I first professionally competed in Washington DC with, "The International Society of Poetry" 2006.
    I wrote a poem for my deceased wife called,
    "Stir the Stew'
    Yes, and I let a real writer and Poet of Laureate.
    (who was actually entertaining us)
    Yes, and it was on HBO.
    Now, I can't remember his name.
    But I let him read.
    And he told me it was good but you need to make your stew still more presentable. Which is of course adjective content.
    Thanks again,
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Douglas Goff
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Love this one too. You really do put your soul into your writing.

You are hands down my favorite poet on here.

Thank you for sharing this!
Douglas

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
    I thank you Douglas for your six stars and review I owe you one.
    Doctor Ricky