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The Book of Sorrows

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Fine Poetry in Depth.

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Comment from Teri7
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Each time I read something about your losses it makes my heart hurt. It always makes me smile when I read who you honor first and it is how we should be also. Honor the Father and His son, Jesus Christ. That is a very sweet picture of Jay. May God bless you my friend! Teri

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    I'm so glad you reviewed this one.
    "7134 Days"
    And, I will do a follow-up on his birthday.
    Coming up in November.
    November 5th, 2022
    (by the way.)
    Doctor Ricky
reply by Teri7 on 18-Oct-2022
    you are so welcome my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment from SuzieWoo
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This is heartbreaking but so well written. I loved certain phrases - especially 'Telephone poles talk and realize this moment is cloaked in pain' brought to mind an image of the pole as silent witness, standing above the action and viewing, knowing all and yet not (yet) in a position to judge. Quite a metaphysical image, thank you for raising it.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
    Why thank you Suzie for reviewing this and when I think back?
    Way back at that site.
    Yes, where the pole is and how the wires connect.
    And, you're right.
    For it's almost like their Sentries in the Night.
    And, they watch something so sad.
    And they were communicating back and forth.
    Just think how many times how many accidents how many telephone poles on how many streets and avenues and how many towns and how many states and how many countries in the world this has happened?
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Comment from Bill Schott
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This piece, 7134 Days, gets through all the rambling hateful words that you might often scribe, and forms a few striking phrases which are very telling.
Mummified as if I immortalized in Tears!
Voices cast an Eerie moment of silence.
Heart of Hearts?
Forever Frozen... Glass.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
    Thanks again Bill for stopping by.
    Doctor Ricky 1024