sunrise over the east sea
today's sunrise2 total reviews
Comment from Atlas Stormzand
Very simple and to the point. I love it, though I would like to see what other two syllable phrases you could come up with for that last line. It feels slightly unconnected from the rest of the work and I know you can think of something better!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Very simple and to the point. I love it, though I would like to see what other two syllable phrases you could come up with for that last line. It feels slightly unconnected from the rest of the work and I know you can think of something better!
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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ah let me tinker with that someone else mentioned that
Comment from jessizero
I think you did a great job with the prompt. You described a beautiful sunset as a "great day," and the picture you supplied reinforced that. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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I think you did a great job with the prompt. You described a beautiful sunset as a "great day," and the picture you supplied reinforced that. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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thanks it was a great day today
