Children
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Comment from jaded831
Children are one of God's greatest gifts. You have a great entry, with universal appeal. Your poem touches the heart and soul, especially for parents whose love created them. Good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Children are one of God's greatest gifts. You have a great entry, with universal appeal. Your poem touches the heart and soul, especially for parents whose love created them. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Jade
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree and I adore my Grandchildren who are shaping up to become worthy adults. Children are a joy to be with and enhance our lives, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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I so agree and I adore my Grandchildren who are shaping up to become worthy adults. Children are a joy to be with and enhance our lives, I enjoyed your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Yes, they do. And they learn so quickly. When it comes to electronics, such as games and remotes, they would show me how to work them. They do not forget anything. They may be short and closer to the floor, but they know where the things they like are stored. Any changes you make in the house, they see it immediately. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Yes, they do. And they learn so quickly. When it comes to electronics, such as games and remotes, they would show me how to work them. They do not forget anything. They may be short and closer to the floor, but they know where the things they like are stored. Any changes you make in the house, they see it immediately. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Carolyn
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jane Jane King
Amen indeed!
Love the simplicity of the words and the artwork. Says a lot in just a few words...Well done!! Very hopeful message. Children possess a lot of innocent wisdom.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Amen indeed!
Love the simplicity of the words and the artwork. Says a lot in just a few words...Well done!! Very hopeful message. Children possess a lot of innocent wisdom.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Jane
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But today, I decided to take a few hours out to immerse myself in poems. And I'm glad to have run across yours. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But today, I decided to take a few hours out to immerse myself in poems. And I'm glad to have run across yours. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Ric
Comment from RodG
Your picture reminds me of a kindergarten class picture the teacher might draw of her students. Would she feel "blessed" to have them? I think so even on days when they are unruly and obnoxious. If she taught in a Catholic school, she would indeed say "Amen." Rod
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Your picture reminds me of a kindergarten class picture the teacher might draw of her students. Would she feel "blessed" to have them? I think so even on days when they are unruly and obnoxious. If she taught in a Catholic school, she would indeed say "Amen." Rod
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Rod, for giving this a look.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Raul
Comment from jessizero
I couldn't agree more! I don't have children of my own, but I am a very enthusiastic aunt. :)
You did a great job conveying your message in just nine syllables. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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I couldn't agree more! I don't have children of my own, but I am a very enthusiastic aunt. :)
You did a great job conveying your message in just nine syllables. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Jessizero
