The end
Final good-bye15 total reviews
Comment from JoannaN
This poem sounds well, has a nice flow and a good message. I like the fact that it can be interpreted in more ways that only one. Lots of luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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This poem sounds well, has a nice flow and a good message. I like the fact that it can be interpreted in more ways that only one. Lots of luck in your contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing thoughtfully, and also for your good wishes.
Comment from lyenochka
This brief poem expresses in rhymed verse how we all would like to say our final goodbye with comfort and holding on to a loved one's hand and looking forward to eternity with God.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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This brief poem expresses in rhymed verse how we all would like to say our final goodbye with comfort and holding on to a loved one's hand and looking forward to eternity with God.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing thoughtfully. Thanks too for the good wishes.
Comment from Faith Williams
Your whole poem gives off this feeling of serenity and calmness, the feeling one would like to have at the end. It's a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Your whole poem gives off this feeling of serenity and calmness, the feeling one would like to have at the end. It's a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing thoughtfully, and for the good wishes.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Would be a good, mello way to end one final goodbye.
That goodbye could refer to many different situations. For instance the end of a relationship, the end of life, and even ta-ta to FanStory.
The solitude of peace can be found in this type of goodbye.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Would be a good, mello way to end one final goodbye.
That goodbye could refer to many different situations. For instance the end of a relationship, the end of life, and even ta-ta to FanStory.
The solitude of peace can be found in this type of goodbye.
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing thoughtfully.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece. Not a big fan of the mixed font colours but each to their own. lol Lovely touches of alliteration and spot on with the syllable count.
All the best
GMG
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece. Not a big fan of the mixed font colours but each to their own. lol Lovely touches of alliteration and spot on with the syllable count.
All the best
GMG
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing thoughtfully.
