Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This made me laugh this morning when I read it.

I love observational poetry and this also a touch of whimsy to it which is quite appealing. Syllable count spot on too.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022

Thank you for the review, I enjoy using weather as inspiration and finding some humor in it instead of letting it getting me down.

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Hi, Carma and a belated welcome to FanStory. I hope you are enjoying sharing your writing here.

These ultra-short poems are treacherous but you have done well here to express this thought. How many times in our lives have we had to adapt our plans because of a simple change in the weather?

Let's hope the sun shines tomorrow!

Steve

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022

Thank you for the review, I enjoy using weather as inspiration and finding some humor in it instead of letting it getting me down.