Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
How did you plan your escape, did you get away from the officer? You know, I have watched movies like these scenarios that you have had. I can only hope that things got better for you.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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How did you plan your escape, did you get away from the officer? You know, I have watched movies like these scenarios that you have had. I can only hope that things got better for you.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
You were a strong willed little cuss. I remain eager to find out if you have to return to the Hermitage. Once again, you did a great job. Looking for the next installment with anticipation. Shirley
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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You were a strong willed little cuss. I remain eager to find out if you have to return to the Hermitage. Once again, you did a great job. Looking for the next installment with anticipation. Shirley
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your insight and the review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Brett, as you probably know by now is I can so identify with you and your experience and feelings. I know, I was an orphan like you but I was adopted two and half years later. Yet, I can still feel how it must have been to be in your situation. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Hi Brett, as you probably know by now is I can so identify with you and your experience and feelings. I know, I was an orphan like you but I was adopted two and half years later. Yet, I can still feel how it must have been to be in your situation. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This speaks of the ability to write songs.
Well written rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Enjoy this weekend.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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This speaks of the ability to write songs.
Well written rich in theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Enjoy this weekend.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Appreciate the review and your kind comments.
Comment from Judy Lawless
With each chapter you give us a bigger glimpse of who you were and what you looked like back then, Brett. Your great imagery also paints a vivid picture of your surroundings. I'd almost forgotten you'd left us with cops chasing in the last chapter. This was a good read.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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With each chapter you give us a bigger glimpse of who you were and what you looked like back then, Brett. Your great imagery also paints a vivid picture of your surroundings. I'd almost forgotten you'd left us with cops chasing in the last chapter. This was a good read.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
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You're most welcome, Brett.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Live free or die, and the race is on. Can he escape the long arm of the law? If he is caught will they make him return to a place he hates so much? What happened to Kids' rights? WEll done! Can't wait to see what happens. Page turner for sure. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Live free or die, and the race is on. Can he escape the long arm of the law? If he is caught will they make him return to a place he hates so much? What happened to Kids' rights? WEll done! Can't wait to see what happens. Page turner for sure. Nancy:)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I held your last post from Thursday to Sunday so that I could reward it properly. But with this one needing to be held even a couple days longer, I didn't want you to have to wait so long for my review. It's a six, like everything else you write, I just don't have one. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Well, I held your last post from Thursday to Sunday so that I could reward it properly. But with this one needing to be held even a couple days longer, I didn't want you to have to wait so long for my review. It's a six, like everything else you write, I just don't have one. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Always appreciate you and your reviews.
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed the second half with their interactions, causing me to hold my breath, and it looks like I'll be holding my breath for him/you for a while longer! (The first part had a bit too much local stuff for a non US citizen to identify with or appreciate.) next chapter soon, I hope.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed the second half with their interactions, causing me to hold my breath, and it looks like I'll be holding my breath for him/you for a while longer! (The first part had a bit too much local stuff for a non US citizen to identify with or appreciate.) next chapter soon, I hope.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Brett,
There was a bit too much descriptive material here for my tastes. Your story is still very interesting, and I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter. I liked the last few paragraphs the best, talking about the cop. I hope you had on some running shoes.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Hello Brett,
There was a bit too much descriptive material here for my tastes. Your story is still very interesting, and I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter. I liked the last few paragraphs the best, talking about the cop. I hope you had on some running shoes.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022
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Appreciate the review. Much more to come so stay tuned.
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I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm impressed by your knowledge of music. Must be a Nashville thing.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Another winner. This is hitting different knowing it's actually about you. The stakes are much higher now for the reader. I like the local speak you use. Gives more flavor to it. Really good reading. Ready for more. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Another winner. This is hitting different knowing it's actually about you. The stakes are much higher now for the reader. I like the local speak you use. Gives more flavor to it. Really good reading. Ready for more. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
