The Best Time of Ohmie's Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Best Time of Ohmie's Life pt 14"Dying of cancer, Ohmie learns his parents are spie
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I think I've missed too much to know who the good guys are, but I'm thinking they aren't sure either. It's great Ohmie got to go to the top of the Jungfraujoch, but he seems to be getting weaker.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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I think I've missed too much to know who the good guys are, but I'm thinking they aren't sure either. It's great Ohmie got to go to the top of the Jungfraujoch, but he seems to be getting weaker.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Yes, Ohmie is dying. So far, only Ohmie and Dad are good guys.
Comment from Michaela Moore
My favorite line in this one is...She didn't cry, but her eyes did.
So Ohmie. The "visit" by the bad guys was a delight to read. And then the line...Stage four lymphoma will make a little girl out of you...HA! Priceless. You are great at the Ohmie zingers. I am creating a name for it. Ohmiespeak. You are great at giving this folk character a voice.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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My favorite line in this one is...She didn't cry, but her eyes did.
So Ohmie. The "visit" by the bad guys was a delight to read. And then the line...Stage four lymphoma will make a little girl out of you...HA! Priceless. You are great at the Ohmie zingers. I am creating a name for it. Ohmiespeak. You are great at giving this folk character a voice.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thank you. I haven't thought of it, but YES!
I love Ohmiespeak!
You make me want to just blab the entire story!
Comment from Judy Lawless
Great chapter, Wayne. I want to take a nap every time Ohmie does! For a kid with cancer, he has way more energy than I do. lol Well written. It's nice to have visitors, as long as they didn't bring COVID with them. Oops, sorry. I just got a negative test today, after two weeks of it, so I'm doing my happy dance. Enjoy your time. Ohmie can wait.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Great chapter, Wayne. I want to take a nap every time Ohmie does! For a kid with cancer, he has way more energy than I do. lol Well written. It's nice to have visitors, as long as they didn't bring COVID with them. Oops, sorry. I just got a negative test today, after two weeks of it, so I'm doing my happy dance. Enjoy your time. Ohmie can wait.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the great review. And thank you for the six stars!
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You're most welcome, Wayne. :)
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's always great to see something or someplace new, but just the word vacation makes me think of having to do what five or six other people want for some extended period of time. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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It's always great to see something or someplace new, but just the word vacation makes me think of having to do what five or six other people want for some extended period of time. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Tell 'em your going to Death Valley next summer.
Thank for the review.
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LOL. I'm not sure I'd even want to go there alone. I'm anxious to learn what you have to say about my new post that's way outside my comfort zone. Have wonderful week!
Comment from Wendy G
So many dangers from every direction, and not knowing who to trust ... if anybody ... makes this full of suspense. Add to that Ohmie's cancer and it makes one just want to be sure that they will all be okay in the end. Yes, cancer will make "a girl" out of a boy who wants to be tough. Girls are just as tough, but boys of that age would never acknowledge that, so t was appropriate that he would think of that expression. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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So many dangers from every direction, and not knowing who to trust ... if anybody ... makes this full of suspense. Add to that Ohmie's cancer and it makes one just want to be sure that they will all be okay in the end. Yes, cancer will make "a girl" out of a boy who wants to be tough. Girls are just as tough, but boys of that age would never acknowledge that, so t was appropriate that he would think of that expression. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you.
I thought of that expression hard and decided to go with what Ohmie would say. But you are 100% correct, of course.
Comment from Douglas Goff
The more chapters I read the more I want to see what happens next. I do think I missed one in between.
This is well written. I didn't see any errors in grammar.
Good work!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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The more chapters I read the more I want to see what happens next. I do think I missed one in between.
This is well written. I didn't see any errors in grammar.
Good work!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you. They're all up there.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I'm sure, despite company, you'll catch back up quickly:-)
I like the line about stage four lymphoma making a girl out of you, since Ohmie has to dress like a girl and that line ties the two together. But we may have a few "girls" reading this who feel that they can handle cancer as well as a boy. Just a thought.
Another good read in the series, Wayne. We'll wait patiently for the next installment. Enjoy your company!
Pam
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I'm sure, despite company, you'll catch back up quickly:-)
I like the line about stage four lymphoma making a girl out of you, since Ohmie has to dress like a girl and that line ties the two together. But we may have a few "girls" reading this who feel that they can handle cancer as well as a boy. Just a thought.
Another good read in the series, Wayne. We'll wait patiently for the next installment. Enjoy your company!
Pam
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I 'did' have that thought (girls). But Ohmie would have had the thought, so...
Thank you for the very nice review.
Comment from royowen
I am hoping for Ohmie's sake, and for mine because I believe in optimism, and I believe in life, but having said that, I've lost a lot of people, friends and family, and a lot to cancer. This is a great episode, with dad absent, and folk of questionable nature looking for him, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I am hoping for Ohmie's sake, and for mine because I believe in optimism, and I believe in life, but having said that, I've lost a lot of people, friends and family, and a lot to cancer. This is a great episode, with dad absent, and folk of questionable nature looking for him, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you. Hang on for a bumpy ride.
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