"The Gift of Life 2003"
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is another enjoyable poem. The message comes across so well. The word choices are excellent. And most of all I enjoyed the message in your poem. Great job again.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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This is another enjoyable poem. The message comes across so well. The word choices are excellent. And most of all I enjoyed the message in your poem. Great job again.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Enjoying the Enjoyables.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from country ranch writer
10/9/2022-----7:51pm
I hope people get the word out to sign organ donor card to help others get their transplants. With the holidays looming up quickly everyone is going to need blood transfusions. I thank everyone for supporting the cause to help others get a second chance in life.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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10/9/2022-----7:51pm
I hope people get the word out to sign organ donor card to help others get their transplants. With the holidays looming up quickly everyone is going to need blood transfusions. I thank everyone for supporting the cause to help others get a second chance in life.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Your review comes with a strong message.
And a Noble cause taken on by the few....
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
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Hugs
Comment from royowen
I don't think we can ever overcome tragedy completely, particularly the loss of a child, my sister had to put a child up for adoption, being in the days of no toleration to pre marital motherhood, particularly at 13, and she lost a child at 18 months, mercifully she had another. Beautifully written Ricky, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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I don't think we can ever overcome tragedy completely, particularly the loss of a child, my sister had to put a child up for adoption, being in the days of no toleration to pre marital motherhood, particularly at 13, and she lost a child at 18 months, mercifully she had another. Beautifully written Ricky, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Yes people stayed home from school back then when they got pregnant.
Good to hear a happy ending here.
Doctor Ricky
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They did
Comment from Marienkiefer
A very poignant story, emanating from pain and deep loss, but also with strands of hope in survival.
Our family withstood a painfully similar loss, long before I was born; he was 21 years old; motorcycle, no helmet. The loss passes on for generations. We honour him through the lives we lead, remembering him kindly and the people he touched as well as speaking his name.
I wish you all the best. Thank you for sharing your story through your writing.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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A very poignant story, emanating from pain and deep loss, but also with strands of hope in survival.
Our family withstood a painfully similar loss, long before I was born; he was 21 years old; motorcycle, no helmet. The loss passes on for generations. We honour him through the lives we lead, remembering him kindly and the people he touched as well as speaking his name.
I wish you all the best. Thank you for sharing your story through your writing.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Motorcycle accidents normally kill.
Nee Jersey the most densely populated state is bad.
Sorry Marien for the loss.
Doctor Ricky
