Jack and Bumkin's Play Date
As they baby talked cheek to cheek36 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Oh how cute, Debi! Such a
charming and whimsical
autumnal 5-7-5 contest
winner! I'm going to show
this gem to my daughter and
two grandchildren, lol!
The photo is priceless too!
Many blessings to you my
sweet friend. ~
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Oh how cute, Debi! Such a
charming and whimsical
autumnal 5-7-5 contest
winner! I'm going to show
this gem to my daughter and
two grandchildren, lol!
The photo is priceless too!
Many blessings to you my
sweet friend. ~
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Oh Regina, I just love hearing from you so much anyway, and then I so appreciate you reading this one and the sweet comments and six stars.
I'm not real long winded as I just found out .I have Covid. But thank you so much my dear dear friend!
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Dear Debi, I will be saying extra
prayers for your speedy recovery
and make sure you drink plenty of
fluids and rest as much as possible.
Many healthy blessings to you.
Comment from mermaids
You have a creative and unique use of words. Babies are so much fun and this is a humorous poem with a very funny pic. I think you have written a new tradition poem for Halloween and congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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You have a creative and unique use of words. Babies are so much fun and this is a humorous poem with a very funny pic. I think you have written a new tradition poem for Halloween and congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you so very much for all of your kind words about this fun one!
You are so sweet!
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, no wonder it won! I am assuming you have some relationship with these two or should I say four examples of a fall festival. I hope the photos don't follow these kids for the rest of their lives! Very fun. Terry.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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LOL, no wonder it won! I am assuming you have some relationship with these two or should I say four examples of a fall festival. I hope the photos don't follow these kids for the rest of their lives! Very fun. Terry.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thanks Terry, but nope. Not any of mine. I have some adorable ones but they'd shoot me. Lol. But I am a lover of any photo online or fb that jumps out at me. I do screenshots, edit them and put them in a folder for when I need something awesome. Much of what I use tho is art of my granddaughter Kenzie.. She is an amazing artist, but some is quite bizarre. Thanks for your kind comments about my lil Halloween 5-7-5!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Jack and Bumkin's Playdate, has the right set up and is definitely a keeper as these shots of these babies is so funny. Just amazing.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This 5-7-5, Jack and Bumkin's Playdate, has the right set up and is definitely a keeper as these shots of these babies is so funny. Just amazing.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Bill. You are so darn sweet and I appreciate your kind words very much!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice little poem about two young children running around innocent and naked in a pumpkin patch. I like the sense of humor, a bit snarky but naughty as well
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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nice little poem about two young children running around innocent and naked in a pumpkin patch. I like the sense of humor, a bit snarky but naughty as well
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Jake, I thank you for your kind words for this one, but please don't misunderstand. To most women, there is nothing sweeter than a babies little bottom. The last thing on anyone's mind was anything besides sweet and cute. I don't get the naughty part. But thanks my friend, as I do appreciate your reading and reviewing it.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very Cute poem. It has a Nice overall presentation background and font choice. Lol
Photo is adorable . Good luck in the contest. We'll done ð???
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This is a very Cute poem. It has a Nice overall presentation background and font choice. Lol
Photo is adorable . Good luck in the contest. We'll done ð???
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Joanne, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. You are very thoughtful! ! It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. They have been making my whole day, as it is so contagious. Thanks again my friend!
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Your so welcome my friend
Comment from Liz Westfall
This picture reminds me of one of those empty cards you can buy that have the funny pictures on the cover. Your poem is quite literally "cheeky," lol. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This picture reminds me of one of those empty cards you can buy that have the funny pictures on the cover. Your poem is quite literally "cheeky," lol. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Liz, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. You are very thoughtful! ! It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. They have been making my whole day, as it is so contagious. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this cute writing prompt entry with us. I smiled at the photo, but then part of me wondered who would do that to babies. LOL I did enjoy reading.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for sharing this cute writing prompt entry with us. I smiled at the photo, but then part of me wondered who would do that to babies. LOL I did enjoy reading.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Barb, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. At least we know that the little pumpkins on their bottoms were done in fun and not anything sick. Right? I don't think there is anything sweeter than a babies little bottom. Unless it comes with a dirty diaper. Lol. Your comments are very thoughtful! ! It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. They have been making my whole day, as it is so contagious. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from Elviss
The cover art couldn't fit any better. This is the kind of poem that my youngest brother would love. I loved how each stanza contains a variation of the human behind-the perfect example of humorous wordplay.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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The cover art couldn't fit any better. This is the kind of poem that my youngest brother would love. I loved how each stanza contains a variation of the human behind-the perfect example of humorous wordplay.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Elvis, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. You are very thoughtful! ! It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. They have been making my whole day, as it is so contagious. Thanks again my friend!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
HAHAHAHA! I haven't read too many truly funny entries in this contest - but this is awfully cute!! If funny pictures were the requirement, I wouldn't even have to read further - you'd take the cake right now!
I had to call my grands over to see it! Thanks so much and GOOD LUCK!! (Soooo cute!!)
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
HAHAHAHA! I haven't read too many truly funny entries in this contest - but this is awfully cute!! If funny pictures were the requirement, I wouldn't even have to read further - you'd take the cake right now!
I had to call my grands over to see it! Thanks so much and GOOD LUCK!! (Soooo cute!!)
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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I thank you so much Robyn, for your very kind and fun comments about the picture and the poem. You are very thoughtful! ! Did your grandkids ask you to paint their little bottoms? And aren't grandkids the greatest invention of all God's blessings? It feels so good to hear that people are smiling big or laughing. They have been making my whole day, as it is so contagious. Thanks again my friend!