He's a Daydream Believer
Humorous 5-7-5 contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I am delighted that I found this poem. I remember the Monkees, but I think I ,prefer looking at your chimp.
Very clever and fun.
Thanks for the smile.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
I am delighted that I found this poem. I remember the Monkees, but I think I ,prefer looking at your chimp.
Very clever and fun.
Thanks for the smile.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Mary. I was pretty young at the time but I still remember them and their TV show. When I came across this picture I just had to use it. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful rest of your day.
=]
Ron
Comment from jessizero
I agree that "wasn't" is two syllables. Your poem was fun! I like "Daydream Believer." :)
Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
I agree that "wasn't" is two syllables. Your poem was fun! I like "Daydream Believer." :)
Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Jessi. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Carlos' girl
I thought love was more than just a fairytale...
Another great Monkees tune. Peter mickey mike and dave.
Nice job w the poetry contest. Best wishes. Perhaps you will win. This was cool
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
I thought love was more than just a fairytale...
Another great Monkees tune. Peter mickey mike and dave.
Nice job w the poetry contest. Best wishes. Perhaps you will win. This was cool
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022
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Wow. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and big sixer, Carlos' Girl. I sure didn't plan on seeing one of those for this silly piece. I was pretty young but I still remember the Monkees and their TV show a little bit. I really appreciate the generous rating and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great rest of your weekend and thank you again.
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Most welcome