Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Very funny. I hope to god, small g as to not offend, the reader gets what is meant, as I believe I did. ...............................................................................................

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022

Me too. Thanks for the read and the feedback.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

LOL! This 5-7-5 really made me laugh. Some of these are so funny! Yours is great. The mental image is hysterical. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

Thank you for the read and encouraging review.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

I think we're all glad hippos don't fly. :)
Excellent 5-7-5 poem for the humor contest
with the nice addition of the rhyme.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

Thanks for the read and the feedback.