Those Summer Nights
This is a humorous poem3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Ts-tsk. What naughty thoughts crossed your collective heads. Stll, the cops must have enjoyed the debut of you all, I contend, leaving you walk away with a warning.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
Ts-tsk. What naughty thoughts crossed your collective heads. Stll, the cops must have enjoyed the debut of you all, I contend, leaving you walk away with a warning.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Hi Tom, the glorious summers of youth, lol! One of
the neighborhood guys must
of seen us girls walking up
to the pool club that late
hour. He was hiding behind
raspberry bushes, lol! I lost
one of my friends that
skinny dipped with us a few
years later to a traffic accident. She was a pre med
student, a tragic loss. Many
blessings to you, thank you
for stopping by my page.
Comment from RodG
Your poem DID make me chuckle as I imagined some drunk guy sitting due in a lifeguard chair late at night while the cops laughed as they cuffed him. One wonders if he was fined or put in jail overnight.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
Your poem DID make me chuckle as I imagined some drunk guy sitting due in a lifeguard chair late at night while the cops laughed as they cuffed him. One wonders if he was fined or put in jail overnight.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Those glorious days of the
summers of my youth, lol!
We were quite an adventurous clique. Sadly,
one of these friends was
killed in a traffic accident a
few years later on. She was
a pre med student, such a
tragic waste. Thank you
so much for visiting my
page and for the 5 stars.
Blessings to you.
Comment from HarryT
Nice recollection of a long ago incident, which I'm sure you and your friends recall with humor. However, I had to read your explanation below before I understood why the scene was humorous, especially teenagers, I assume being drunk. Also, was the use of US instead of WE for effect? The usage bothered me.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
Nice recollection of a long ago incident, which I'm sure you and your friends recall with humor. However, I had to read your explanation below before I understood why the scene was humorous, especially teenagers, I assume being drunk. Also, was the use of US instead of WE for effect? The usage bothered me.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Hello Harry, I think I recall
those crazy summer nights
of long ago more fondly
lately because after we
graduated high school, one
of the girls in my clique
was killed in a traffic accident. She was a pre med
student, such a tragic shame.
I'm 65 now, and sometimes
long for my lost youth. I've
always been a nostalgic
person. The one good thing
about the drinking was we
didn't drink and drive. But I
do regret getting drunk in
the past. Thank you for
taking the time to read
and review this poem.
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You are wecome.