Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao !
You have your first vote!

Your wee poem is silly dilly and has a great rhyme.

I also learnt that the hockey disc is called puck.


Stay safe!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022

Thanks!

reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022

I hope to hear from you today.

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022

I hope you are well. I appreciate your reviews!

Comment from Dr. Von

Excellent

Well done on meeting the writing prompt. The 5-7-5 poem is absolutely humorous, and it is wonderfully supported by the artwork. I like the words you used to flow the poem to a good conclusion. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022

Thanks!

reply by Dr. Von on 09-Oct-2022

You are welcome.

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022

😃

reply by Dr. Von on 09-Oct-2022

lol

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the humor contest
with the nice addition of the three rhymes.
The mighty Ducks strike again.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

Thanks!