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A Book of Poetry by a Priest.

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Comment from Jay Squires
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Ricky, this is far and away the best and most sensitive poem you've left in our care. I've never thought of moonglow in quite the way you've depticted it. You've captured not just its beauty, but it's mystery, and its link to the Almighty. Now I will only think of it that way. Thank you, Ricky!

Jay

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    I thank you for your beautiful comments Jay and I enjoyed that so much, I decided to edit it and make it much better!
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Love that you describe the moon as a catered bliss. Probably one of the best descriptions ever. In poetry the moon is usually described romantically. Silver or pale sliver. You managed to describe it realistically yet joyfully. Great nod to the Big Guy up above. This was fantastic. Gretchen

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
    Konichiwa Gretchen and thank you for your support!
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Comment from country ranch writer
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The moon glows are a hunters worst nightmare for deer roam eating at night and lay up resting hiding well out of sight of hunters. You never know they are right there in plain sight.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your review and concerns about our dear population in New Jersey that are starving that's why we have hunters the last deer the less eating the more food for the others.
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