Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Nice effort, Pookie. The meter is better than usual. I see that you got a couple of votes in the contest. I still have faith that you will get better at meter eventually.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022

Thanks!

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have your first vote!

I am presuming that in your poem you are describing all the many wondrous ways your man shows you how much he loves and cares for you.


He listens to what is in your mind and makes the effort to understand you, he cooks meals you enjoy and he makes you smile ,

these caring, loving gestures/attitudes are the ones that appeal to me the most.

I wish you many blissful years to come with your Man!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

Thanks! I am in another contest too.

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2022

I hope you read my other poem too.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This "I love you" poem was so very sweet and romantic. Just because I have given up on love doesn't mean I don't believe in it. This is it! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Welcome, thank you!

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Ah, this is very well crafted and it sounds like you found yourself a true knight in shining amour. A person who willingly does all those wonderful things is a keeper. Good solid rhyming couplets.

PS: You may want to increase the font size.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022

Thanks!