My Love for You
Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this poem about the love you share with your significant other. I like that you are there for each other. Not everyone is blessed enough to have that. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed this poem about the love you share with your significant other. I like that you are there for each other. Not everyone is blessed enough to have that. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from lancellot
This is a well made free verse, love letter to your significant other. You touch on the really important aspects of love. Being there for one another, being dependable and both giving openly and freely.
Great entry.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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This is a well made free verse, love letter to your significant other. You touch on the really important aspects of love. Being there for one another, being dependable and both giving openly and freely.
Great entry.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Beautiful. I felt you responded more to why she should love you. Except for the first paragraph. Just a suggestion, changing I've to I have. It seems to present more meaning when each word stands alone. Beautiful and bet She will love it.
As long as you both love it, that is what really matters.
Write On! Good Luck
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Beautiful. I felt you responded more to why she should love you. Except for the first paragraph. Just a suggestion, changing I've to I have. It seems to present more meaning when each word stands alone. Beautiful and bet She will love it.
As long as you both love it, that is what really matters.
Write On! Good Luck
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review! I have fixed it. Is it now good enough for a five stars rating?
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The last two paragraphs still reflect more about why she should love you. Maybe omit contractions as well. Let each word stand alone, please. Then see how it sounds.
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Lighten up a little. This is a virtual place. Stars ARE beautiful, they light up your romantic night. A little humor here: less I more U. Lol
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Beautiful beautiful I would go in and give you six stars now, but even better I just voted for you. ?Always strive for perfection?
But never loose the meaning! Best of Luck!
Comment from Regina Elliott
A very pretty romantic poem.
It's charming in its devotion
and love. My very best wishes
for the contest. This is a
superb contender. Many
blessings to you and your
loved one.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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A very pretty romantic poem.
It's charming in its devotion
and love. My very best wishes
for the contest. This is a
superb contender. Many
blessings to you and your
loved one.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
