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A Fake Poem

A children's poem? Maybe not...

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello Maria. I loved your imaginative and fun poem that mixes Halloween with fantasy. I love fantasy. Good job on the art that sets the stage for the content. Glad you are being a bit silly ~ so fun!

Melissa

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    I need to be silly right now. The funny thing is that I wasn't thinking of Halloween at all (weird), but about all the evil in the world that I'll never understand. I don't mean I'm perfect, I've done my share of bad things, but some degrees of cruelty are impossible to understand.
    That's why I wish I could cook some magic rain and make it rain all over our planet.
    Thanks so much for reading.xxx
Comment from Sanku
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yes ,it made me smile .You were cooking up a special dish that went up the sky .But the cauldron is still there ,so I hope you will make us smile again .Some smiles are badly needed...

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
    Indeed. Some people say that if you put a smile on your face kind of on purpose, it will eventually become natural. I should try that.
    Thanks so much for your review.