A Fake Poem
A children's poem? Maybe not...12 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
This is a wonderful flight of fantasy for young and old. I think we all have a little Peter Pan characteristic in us! Evi
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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This is a wonderful flight of fantasy for young and old. I think we all have a little Peter Pan characteristic in us! Evi
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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I'm glad you liked it, Evi. I'm trying to learn to write free verse at the moment. I don't know if I'll succeed, but it's entertaining.
Thanks so much for you kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You certainly cooked up a witches brew here and this is a fine offering for Halloween Heather and I loves the sentiments, much fun served with a little trickery, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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You certainly cooked up a witches brew here and this is a fine offering for Halloween Heather and I loves the sentiments, much fun served with a little trickery, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Hi Dolly,
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, anything can turn into magic at the poet's hand. I enjoyed
your poem, Heather. Your words were well thought out. Not until
the end did I realize the 'cooking' was a metaphor. Hopefully,
the soup will do its job and bring smiles to those it falls on.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Yes, anything can turn into magic at the poet's hand. I enjoyed
your poem, Heather. Your words were well thought out. Not until
the end did I realize the 'cooking' was a metaphor. Hopefully,
the soup will do its job and bring smiles to those it falls on.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank YOU for reading. Take care.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem, Heather, your poem put a smile in my face. I'll read it to my grandson. :) I love the presentation too. I watched the video, it's funny. Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Excellent poem, Heather, your poem put a smile in my face. I'll read it to my grandson. :) I love the presentation too. I watched the video, it's funny. Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I'm glad it made you smile.
I love the singer, so I use whatever opportunity I have to share his music.
Hugs,
MJ
Comment from royowen
I can accept that, as long as there's no frogs or the unicorn, the turtle and the...well... maybe the fish, but not a baby. can be in my soup, or stew, and I will still be refreshed by its nourishment. But it's a lovely day, Beautifully written, Heather my friend, bless you Roy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I can accept that, as long as there's no frogs or the unicorn, the turtle and the...well... maybe the fish, but not a baby. can be in my soup, or stew, and I will still be refreshed by its nourishment. But it's a lovely day, Beautifully written, Heather my friend, bless you Roy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Never a baby, never.
Thanks for reading, Roy.
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Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for the fun poem and for the cheer for the day. I also was not familiar with the song or the artist who covered it.
Glad that the unicorn and turtle and baby fish are safe and happy in your yard.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you for the fun poem and for the cheer for the day. I also was not familiar with the song or the artist who covered it.
Glad that the unicorn and turtle and baby fish are safe and happy in your yard.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I couldn't have possibly killed them.
Dan Vasc is my favourite singer and I try to use his videos whenever possible.
Thanks for reading. x
Comment from aryr
The picture was delightful as was the video that I just had to watch three times, lol, Heather. The words you chose were actually a great compliment to your poem. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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The picture was delightful as was the video that I just had to watch three times, lol, Heather. The words you chose were actually a great compliment to your poem. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Hi Aryr,
I love the singer. His favourite music is power metal, but whatever he sings, it sounds wonderful.
My husband, who's studied music, says his cover of Jesus Christ Superstar surpasses Ted Neely's. He just has an incredible voice.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BmQ54Z82X9M
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To me as well, you are so welcome, Heather. Blessings n Hugs!
Comment from Teri7
Heather, This is a very cute poem you have penned. I used to love that song you posted. I think you could say this is a free verse poem. Thank you for the smile today! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Heather, This is a very cute poem you have penned. I used to love that song you posted. I think you could say this is a free verse poem. Thank you for the smile today! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I'm happy you found this fun, Teri. Hugs.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very nice Miss Heather. I have to admit that the title caught my eye and that is why I chose to read this one. Very cute and yet classy.
I appreciate you and your work. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Very nice Miss Heather. I have to admit that the title caught my eye and that is why I chose to read this one. Very cute and yet classy.
I appreciate you and your work. Keep it up!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much, Douglas. I'm not very good at poetry, but I don't have much time to write prose now. So writing bad poetry is better than not writing at all, I guess... A way to exercise the writing muscle.
Comment from Regina Elliott
I really like this charming
and enchanting poem. It is
positive and encouraging.
It's a spooky season time
whimsical write. My very
best wishes for your writing
endeavors.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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I really like this charming
and enchanting poem. It is
positive and encouraging.
It's a spooky season time
whimsical write. My very
best wishes for your writing
endeavors.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much, Regina, for this sweet review.
