I love you because
Why do I love you2 total reviews
Comment from Cass Carlton
There are two Spags herein. "Load" star ought to be spelt "lode" star. And shining has one "n" in the middle not two. Just a note to make this a perfect poem. This is a beautifully written poem in tribute to a true, true love. What a lucky girl!!! What a lucky fella!!! It sums up his feelings for her in loving words of praise and thanks.Well said, my dear chap, well done. cheers Cass
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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There are two Spags herein. "Load" star ought to be spelt "lode" star. And shining has one "n" in the middle not two. Just a note to make this a perfect poem. This is a beautifully written poem in tribute to a true, true love. What a lucky girl!!! What a lucky fella!!! It sums up his feelings for her in loving words of praise and thanks.Well said, my dear chap, well done. cheers Cass
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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thanks for catching the typos. I'll will them now
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
She is a lucky girl that you find so many things to love about her. This is a well written poem, but you might make a few changes: "shining" and "lode star"
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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She is a lucky girl that you find so many things to love about her. This is a well written poem, but you might make a few changes: "shining" and "lode star"
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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yeah others have caught those typos. Thanks a lot
