Abusing Meth
Contest Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
This was a very good topic for the entry. I don't know if you know someone named Beth who suffered from taking this horrible drug, but using a name actually gave more of a reality to your other statement. Great job Raul, and I am appreciative to you for bringing awareness to this deadly topic. Bravo my dear friend!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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This was a very good topic for the entry. I don't know if you know someone named Beth who suffered from taking this horrible drug, but using a name actually gave more of a reality to your other statement. Great job Raul, and I am appreciative to you for bringing awareness to this deadly topic. Bravo my dear friend!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a powerful 1-6-1 poem. The text is a great size. The message is stark, especially ending with a person's name. That makes the message strong. The visual fits perfectly. Would be good to have the addiction hotline in the author's notes section. You have a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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This is a powerful 1-6-1 poem. The text is a great size. The message is stark, especially ending with a person's name. That makes the message strong. The visual fits perfectly. Would be good to have the addiction hotline in the author's notes section. You have a good entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author. The picture plus
your few syllables paired perfectly. I liked that you mentioned
an actual person's name like you were speaking directly to her.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author. The picture plus
your few syllables paired perfectly. I liked that you mentioned
an actual person's name like you were speaking directly to her.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from jessizero
Your poem used the correct syllable count and rhyme scheme. It was stark and truthful. Thank you for choosing to share this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Your poem used the correct syllable count and rhyme scheme. It was stark and truthful. Thank you for choosing to share this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Abusing Meth, has the proper formatting and reminds Stehanie that drugs are bad and if she saw her brains on drugs, they would remind her of fried eggs.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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This 1-6-1, Abusing Meth, has the proper formatting and reminds Stehanie that drugs are bad and if she saw her brains on drugs, they would remind her of fried eggs.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
thank you for posting a poem about meth. Meth is a powerful drug that does much to the brain and body. The teeth also get damaged. We must take this drug off the street!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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thank you for posting a poem about meth. Meth is a powerful drug that does much to the brain and body. The teeth also get damaged. We must take this drug off the street!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review! You're welcome! I agree with you!
