Hurricane
Nonet30 total reviews
Comment from Charles W. Johnson
I have yet to take a stab at writing a nonet, primarily because it is daunting to try to capture feeling and emotion under such restrictions. However, you've done it. I enjoyed reading it. I hope the subject of this poem is from your imagination and not someone you know.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I have yet to take a stab at writing a nonet, primarily because it is daunting to try to capture feeling and emotion under such restrictions. However, you've done it. I enjoyed reading it. I hope the subject of this poem is from your imagination and not someone you know.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Raul1
This is a very good nonet poem. It is interesting and unique. Well written. Nice job! Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. It's beautifully written. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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This is a very good nonet poem. It is interesting and unique. Well written. Nice job! Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. It's beautifully written. I like it. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice poem about hurricanes and wrath of God, the sheer fury of nature unleashed and the hopelessness many of us feel after seeing the destruction these storms can cause.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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nice poem about hurricanes and wrath of God, the sheer fury of nature unleashed and the hopelessness many of us feel after seeing the destruction these storms can cause.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Aussie
Amazing Grace who is saved after a hurricane. Was this in your neck of the woods? Perhaps it is fiction. I hope so for your sakes. Across the world (take Florida for instance) terrible cost of lives and property. K xx
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Amazing Grace who is saved after a hurricane. Was this in your neck of the woods? Perhaps it is fiction. I hope so for your sakes. Across the world (take Florida for instance) terrible cost of lives and property. K xx
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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No .It was in US TVnews showed the visuals of devastation.
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Florida hurricane?
Comment from GWHARGIS
It is amazing how we can be humbled by nature. This was full of the intense fury of a hurricane. I live on the Outer Banks of North Carolina and you captured it in the first two lines. Great poem. The devastation of wind and rain and storm surge is such a force. Gretchen
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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It is amazing how we can be humbled by nature. This was full of the intense fury of a hurricane. I live on the Outer Banks of North Carolina and you captured it in the first two lines. Great poem. The devastation of wind and rain and storm surge is such a force. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Abilene Riley
I love this. "High tech man who conquered skies". If only we could learn we are so small in this world, I think we would live much richer lives. Great job pulling out so much feeling.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I love this. "High tech man who conquered skies". If only we could learn we are so small in this world, I think we would live much richer lives. Great job pulling out so much feeling.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is unfortunately what a hurricane can do and it sounds like you have witnessed this first hand and I hope you are okay after the hurricane, thankfully we don't have then where I live, a fine nonet, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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This is unfortunately what a hurricane can do and it sounds like you have witnessed this first hand and I hope you are okay after the hurricane, thankfully we don't have then where I live, a fine nonet, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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In India(where I live) I saw the visuals of Florida in The TV,So I wrote about that .Thanks for stopping by.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words were descriptive and creative. I found the words to
be expressed with anguish without control of the hurricane as the author states a "fury of nature". The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is awesome and goes well with the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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The author's words were descriptive and creative. I found the words to
be expressed with anguish without control of the hurricane as the author states a "fury of nature". The poem flows and connects well. The
artwork is awesome and goes well with the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you very muc,
Comment from Heather Knight
Hi,
I've just read another poem about a hurricane and it's heartbreaking. I cannot begin to imagine how scary it must be.
As you say, even if technology has advanced incredibly quickly in this past few years, we're still helpless when it comes to natural disasters.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Hi,
I've just read another poem about a hurricane and it's heartbreaking. I cannot begin to imagine how scary it must be.
As you say, even if technology has advanced incredibly quickly in this past few years, we're still helpless when it comes to natural disasters.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, that's a sobering observation. Sometimes we think too much about our achievements ("hi-tech man who conquered skies") But the reality is that we are just tiny from the perspective of all creation.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Yes, that's a sobering observation. Sometimes we think too much about our achievements ("hi-tech man who conquered skies") But the reality is that we are just tiny from the perspective of all creation.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen. When mother nature gets angry there is nothing we can do.
