Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

Roy, you are fulfilling your role in this world. Getting the message out there in these dark days. The shadow that covers every country will lift when He lifts it with His marvellous Light. Well done my friend. K xx

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Kay, for this gracious review and super comments made, blessings Roy,

Comment from karenina

Excellent

An especially beautiful poem, Roy. No judgement, no chastising--a simple reminder to each of us that faith will bear us through.

Very comforting. A grace-filled embrace of best intentions!

Karenina

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Karen, for this gracious review and super comments, blessings Roy,

reply by karenina on 06-Oct-2022

Blessings to you, Roy....

Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

That is a thought provoking question.

This verse challenges us to ask ourselves that very question.

I often wonder what my purpose is beyond motherhood and marriage.

Now that my kids are almost out of the house to start their lives, I look forward to the next chapter.

Where will I be lead?
What will I do once I am there?

I like that your verse encourages the reader to ponder the time spent in their lives.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks for this gracious review and super comments , blessings Roy,

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your poem conveys a powerful message about our knowledge and our wisdom. There's so much we don't know, but we're smart enough to know the Lord loves ALL and WISE enough to know we can't please Him if we don't have faith.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Janice, for this gracious review and super comments, blessings Roy,

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Funny you should quote those two scriptures, I was going to mention them in my response. It is amazing that so many people who actually try to pray to God without really believing that he exists. Praying to someone you are not convinced is real is an act of superstition. An insult to our God Jehovah.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Nomi, for this gracious review and super comments, blessings Roy,

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Beautiful poem of faith, Roy! Thank you for sharing and always reminding us of the gospel. You are fulfilling the role that God has laid on your heart to gently goad all to the Lord!

What is my role in this dark world that's lost it's weary way? (its)

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Helen, for this gracious review and super comments, blessings Roy,

Comment from Charles W. Johnson

Excellent

Great meter and flow. Some unique word choices that add interest. Just a very solid poem from start to finish, and an important message too. Thanks for the entertaining read.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Charles for this gracious review and super comments, blessings Roy,

Comment from PENofFIRE

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem that carries a wonderful salvation message. You spoke well of God's feelings regarding sin. I pray this message gets across to those who need Jesus. What a privilege it is to use our gift for the Kingdom's work. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks, for this gracious review and super comments, blessings Roy,

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

A fine poem written in iambic heptametre here. Your faith rings through like a clear bell, your rhymes are natural, and the flow of words is a good choice for this expression of faith.

Many thanks for sharing. :))

Gloria

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Gloria, for this gracious review and super comments, blessings Roy,

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Roy, This is a very true and very well written poem you have penned. You used great words that were so full of truth. Two great scriptures from Hebrews. Thank you for sharing! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2022

Thanks Teri, for this gracious review and super comments, blessings Roy,